Of course, this is just a joke between a few brothers in the dormitory.

Afterwards, Jiang Feng learned about Guo Jinzhang about what was going on.

It turned out that Guo Jinzhang did not go home during the winter vacation, but stayed at school to work and study. In his spare time, he heard people talk about online novels that were very popular in the past two years, and it is said that he could make a lot of money.

Guo Jinzhang's family was not well-off and he kept thinking about making money. After hearing what people said, he was moved. When he returned to the dormitory after finishing his work, he went online to check it out. He suddenly felt good, and then he took the time to start typing.

As an online author, Guo Jinzhang suffered a little setback in his creation, but he already had the perseverance that an online author should have. Such a shameless spirit is the basic skill of an online novel writer, and Jiang Feng is not as good as him.

"Guo Jinzhang, I actually like to read online novels. Tonight, I will read your masterpiece."

Jiang Feng was very surprised that there was a contracted author of Qidian from Capital University. Jiang Feng sighed, but, thinking about it, even in the starting point of his previous life, there were a large number of students from famous schools constantly creating at the starting point. For example, the "Wild Fox under the Tree" written by "Su Shen Ji", is a talented man from Capital University.

"No problem, I believe you will definitely become my first fan." Guo Jinzhang said carelessly. "Come on, come on, Jiang Feng, I'll send you a link, you can take a look."

After the winter vacation, Guo Jinzhang started writing novels. He only wrote for more than a month and didn't have much popularity. Guo Jinzhang was so depressed that he sighed that he was born at the wrong time. What he wrote was simply shocking the world, so why didn't anyone read it? In fact, everyone just need to look at it patiently for a few more glances to discover that my book is really a wonderful book.

This is entirely Guo Jinzhang's own judgment.

"Slay the Sky"!

What an arrogant name. Logically speaking, such a novel name will definitely become popular as soon as it was released. Jiang Feng was an old bird who had been around Qidian for many years in his previous life. He had basically read Qidian's good books. How could he not know the importance of a good name? Such a good name will be snatched away after a few years. If he snatched a good name and didn't write a good one well, it would be crazy.

"Hey, I thought about this name for three days and three nights before I came up with it."

When Guo Jinzhang heard Jiang Feng pronounce this name, he was very proud.

"Okay, in terms of name, it's a good name. But the main text is not yet decided." Jiang Feng said.

There are too many dog ​​meat sold by the sheep on Qidian. In addition, Jiang Feng also knows that if no one reads the novel in Qidian, it is not that the editor will not recommend it to you, nor that the readers have no vision, it is that the book is completely unfavorable. Or, it is not that the book cannot be said that it is not suitable for readers' tastes.

"A weak boy, who was bullied, finally stood on the top of the fairy world..."

This is an introduction to this book.

Really, the introduction is a failure.

In order to guide Guo Jinzhang, Jiang Feng said directly: "Guo Jinzhang, your introduction is too simple. Do you think that this short sentence can attract readers? no, no, no, there is a lot of introductions like this. A lot of novels tell about a weak boy, and then finally became no1 in this world. In other words, you wrote a nonsense in the introduction!"

"Ah, so that's it." Guo Jinzhang heard Jiang Feng say it, and thought about it, and for a moment, he realized it very well.

"Thank you, Jiang Feng, please give me some advice." Although Guo Jinzhang was very proud, he was not the kind of person who didn't listen to his opinions, especially Jiang Feng who impressed Guo Jinzhang last semester.

"Okay, I'll read the first three chapters of your novel first. If the first three chapters are not written well, you will basically be finished."

In modern society, there are many books. Unlike when I was a child, there were only a few miscellaneous books except textbooks. Therefore, the post-80s people generally read Jin Yong's novels. However, for the post-90s people, they probably only heard of Jin Yong's name. As for those who have read, there are very few. At this time, for online novels, we must keep pace with the times and grasp the readers' tastes, so that we can write a red book.

Therefore, the first three chapters of a novel are particularly important. Qidian.com has a lot of novels. If you haven't explained the background of a novel in the first three chapters and ambushed the lines there, you probably have run away. According to Jiang Feng's understanding, Guo Jinzhang's writing style is pretty good, and some essays he usually writes are worthy of the word "Jinzhang" in his name. Jiang Feng is estimating that it may be because Guo Jinzhang has not mastered the specific writing method.

Click to enter the novel page, Jiang Feng first read the first three chapters of the novel.

About five minutes later, Jiang Feng had finished watching.

This is a fairy tale story, which Jiang Feng can be sure of. However, in the first three chapters, the protagonist is still struggling with the rags in the 21st century. Jiang Feng looked at the catalog and found that the protagonist did not die until Chapter 10, and then traveled to a strange world of fairy tale.

In order to learn more about the world of fairy tale written by Guo Jinzhang, Jiang Feng jumped directly to Chapter 10.

After reading some more content, Jiang Feng finally understood why the novel written by Guo Jinzhang was lost.

"Guo Jinzhang, with my ability to read novels for more than ten years, even if you write this novel, you may not be popular." Jiang Feng said without hesitation.

"Ah, no." Guo Jinzhang thought Jiang Feng would appreciate his novels very much, but unexpectedly, Jiang Feng, Xie Qiao, Wade and Xu Deliang had the same vision.

"See it, Xiao Guo, Xiao Guo, not only do we say that your novel is not very good."

At this time, Xie Qiao, Wade, Xu Deliang and others were playing games beside each other. After hearing Jiang Feng say it, they started to make noises beside each other.

"However, your writing style is good, and your storytelling ability is OK. If you modify it a little, you might be able to write a red book." Jiang Feng said again.

"Really?" Although Jiang Feng is not the author, Guo Jinzhang heard Jiang Feng's analysis just now and seemed to know a lot about online novels, and then hurriedly asked for advice.

"Of course it's true." Jiang Feng said affirmatively.

In fact, most novels in the world have certain skills, whether they are online novels or physical novels. Perhaps for those with higher art, they focus on the skills of novels, but on the dissemination of culture. Obviously, most novels now do not meet this standard. As an ordinary person, you don’t need to pursue that height.

Although Jiang Feng did not write novels online, in his previous life, as an otaku, the novels he read were calculated in a hundred years. With such a broad vision and his current knowledge, he naturally knew a lot about novel routines. In fact, novel writing skills have been circulated in later generations. For example, the nine-line writing method, the routine of determining life and death at the beginning of the three chapters has been widely circulated. As long as you study it carefully, you can generally achieve good results in the online novel market.

Looking at Guo Jinzhang's humbly asking for advice, Jiang Feng did not hide his own opinions and said to Guo Jinzhang: "First of all, your main text is not good. You only entered the topic after the tenth chapter of the article, that is, you only started to enter the world of fairy tales. So, isn't the content of the first ten chapters nonsense?"

Seeing Guo Jinzhang refuting, Jiang Feng waved his hand and signaled him to finish his words, and then continued, "Of course, you will say that you are explaining the story of your previous life and adding a sense of substitution. However, in fact, the previous life has nothing to do with the world of fairy tales. You can just spend a few hundred words to introduce it, but what about you? You actually spent 30,000 words! Why are you still traveling through time in your past life? As a reader, when facing dozens of novels placed in front of me, I must have chosen the kind of novel that can attract me at a glance. But your book is too slow. Maybe, even if someone clicks to read the name of your novel, he will probably flash after reading two or three chapters."

"It makes sense. I originally thought that I would explain things from my previous life clearly. After traveling through time, readers will be able to understand the protagonist's personality more clearly. After you say that, I can completely simplify the content of the first 30,000 words to 300."

Guo Jinzhang is a smart person, otherwise how could he be admitted to a top-notch university in the country like Capital University? Faced with Jiang Feng's guidance and just a little explanation, Guo Jinzhang understood.

"This is a taboo in online novels. Do not write something irrelevant at the beginning or lay some foreshadowing. Because for online novels, to put it bluntly, it is similar to fast food in novels. Will you still care about its cooking skills when you eat fast food? No? It is the same for online novels. Everyone is watching and playing, spending some spare time, and how can you think too much?" Jiang Feng said.

Books like Jin Yong, which have not yet entered the protagonist's first tens of thousands of words, may be placed in the online novel market and will also have to be lost.

Of course, whether Jin Yong's novels will be lost in the online literature market is also a debate. Some people say that they must be lost in the end. Given the impetuous mood of online readers, they may have thrown Jin Yong's novels to the Pacific Ocean long ago. However, some people believe that even if Jin Yong's novels did not get to the point at the beginning, but the writing skills of others are too powerful, they should be able to make up for it.

The two sides quarreled, but no one convinced each other. After all, this kind of thing cannot happen, and no one has any evidence to show it.
Chapter completed!