ashamed statement(2/2)
In addition, I am willing to talk to readers about my ideas and other things.
Readers and authors have equal personalities and mutual respect, so that they can work hard to realize the Chinese dream.
Finally, I will talk about my subsequent ideas. Currently, I have 60,000 yuan in deposit. I may review it, but I am a little unable to start.
How to go after 60,000? While considering, I want to work hard to cater to the market, but I don’t know if it can be done, so I can only wait and see.
There are also long-term problems, and there is really no way to do it. For example, the equity structure of Pinghuapuzi is a practical matter. It is not easy to write it out concisely, so I can only spend more writing.
Ahem, some old readers should know what I wrote in the earliest book, although Qidian dragged it into the silk room with one-size-fits-all size.
But right, I have read it, especially those who have read the appendix, should have some confidence in my ability in this regard. This time traveler bonus with modern "soft" technology cannot be explained simply in just a few words.
But some readers focus on "安容", and this idea is a bit dangerous...
In addition, because the first book was forced to be cut, my second book was also a semi-automatic eunuch, so all this was the fault of Qidian!
Let’s continue to talk about this long-lasting question. A plot I am writing about is that Zhou Zong takes the initiative to approach Li Yu and then proposes to get married, which is of course conditional.
So if you see this in the future, you may understand why there was a plot where Li Hongji suppressed Zhou Zong in Jiangbei, and then Zhou Xu talked about secretly, and then there was a plot where Zhou Ehuang met Li Yu before Zhou and Li met.
From my aesthetic and writing perspective, the extremely important decision of Zhou Zong marrying a daughter must not be described in the Nordic minimalist style, such as "Zhou Zong made yy considerations for xx purposes and finally implemented the zz strategy."
Political alliance through marriage is an extremely important matter. We must fully consider internal and external factors, and everyone must explain their ideas.
If you get married in the wrong way, there will be no follow-up remedy for divorce in that era. The Zhou family will suffer a huge loss.
If the situation was not stronger than the human, Zhou Zong might not have come to this point.
Therefore, there must be three small plots of Li Hongji's plot, Zhou Xu's secret talk, and Ehuang's meeting as the backbone, so that the two sides can finally get along with each other and form a private alliance.
This is why my writing style is not pleasing. There are too many intervals between a complete plot, which leads to a poor reading experience.
It took about 5 words to read for nearly ten days from the time the prince dealt with Zhou Zong to the time when Zhou Li became a gangster, which was not friendly to readers.
In fact, this can be written as a single-line plot, rather than being inserted into other plots.
The problem is, I want to get as close to historical facts as possible. In the summer of 949, when the Southern Tang attacked Ma Chu, if this time node is present, it will unconsciously multi-line, resulting in the article being too "full" and too "thick".
In fact, it is okay not to write according to history, but it is difficult to break through the rules set by myself. This is inexplicable and I am helpless.
Next, it will probably be as single as possible.
Go to the historical line of tmd!
A reason for the plot of Li Hongji suppressing Zhou Zong just now was to lead the matter of Tianxiong Army guards, increase Li Jing's vigilance towards his eldest son, and the necessity of rushing to launch Li Yu.
The plot between Li Hongji and Chai Kehong was discussed how to deal with Zhou Zong and Li Jing, but it caused the counterattack of the Xiaoyao Sect and Li Jing. After being resolved by Li Hongji, it became an excuse for him to reach into Xidu.
From external forces, he put huge pressure on Li Yu, forcing him to seek new allies to protect himself. Zhou Zong also faced such a problem, so the two of them later became traitors.
I have always believed that things in this world are often connected by weak logic, and weak logic can easily become strong logic and even form sufficient conditions between things under the promotion of unexpected events or those who are interested.
So how to understand and apply these weak logics to gradually strengthen them and ultimately form dramatic conflicts is where I spend my time thinking about it.
But this writing method is not pleasing. Fuzzy control in cybernetics is much more difficult than precise control, but no one likes the former in daily life, which is also the same.
The words in the wedge are not just for the purpose of removing the book bag, but will be echoed in the following text.
However, following my good friend's advice, the wedge part may be modified.
Yesterday, a reader criticized me, "The hidden thread is not a sentence in your chapter, you must explain the cause and effect" {this is the general idea}.
I admit the criticism, but in a defensive sentence, Gogol said, "If there is a gun hanging on the wall of the first act, then the third act must be started."
My problem now may be that everything from Colt to Gatlin on the wall is available. Although it is a wheel, I can see it myself a little dazzled.
Well, consider taking some off first...
I also had a headache for a problem. Both books put a shackle on the protagonist from the beginning and let him move within a limited range.
The one who is on the books is the lowest level artist. Although Mr. Weilei is the backer, he cannot get on.
In fact, I can also let the two of them join the Military Control Commission directly. If you write like this, it will definitely attract more readers, but I seriously suspect that you old white readers who are chasing you will probably abandon the book. The reason why you can vote for this book is just not going to follow the routine?
However, reality is cruel, and the result of not following the routine is a failure.
This book is also a problem. If you can continue writing it, at least in the first part, which is when Li Yu becomes emperor, you basically don’t expect to see qualities such as “killing and decisiveness” and “resolute and courageous”.
A prince in the sixth position is not qualified to talk about these things when facing the Three-Body Movement with countless resources.
What you can do is to carefully develop and leap feudal wool under pressure. You can finally gain five points of benefits and spit out two points in order to seek compromise.
As for the subordinates, there are very few who bow down to him. In the future, there will probably be many temporary allies, each with their own ulterior motives and unite with certain interests.
In this case, I still have to adhere to the highest program of not abuse the Lord, which is a bit difficult.
But if the first part can be completed and the second part of the world is entered, the current egg shrinkage may be changed.
I will try to get along with Song's anus, but according to Nan Tang's useless combat power, I can only swing the time traveler's golden finger.
Let's build an atomic bomb to play with it?
After all, online articles are about the author creating a world. Whether the author sets the world according to his own life experience or according to market demand is the difference between them.
For me, I wanted to do it according to the latter, but I often went to the front as I wrote.
This is a huge problem.
It's actually a very painful thing for me.
Speaking of this, I thought that Pu Xiang Zhenren's book "Fan Jin's Ordinary Life" has been completed. Some readers also complained that it was not pleasant enough, not decisive enough, and the protagonist was timid and almost vulgar.
In fact, this is the projection of the real world in online literature.
The complainer is right, and the author is right.
So what's wrong?
I don't know either……
I am ashamed that a person who writes an article at Qidian still needs to write such self-judgment-like articles to explain the writing intention.
Obviously, the Fengzi Hua Chuan has not yet been introduced.
By the way, if this book fails, I will write about an O94-class nuclear submarine with a two-way gate to a main god world with a system.
I was a little excited to think about it.
!!!Just when I was drunk and about to post this article, Qidian actually gave me a strong promotion of the app's history this week, and the history channel of the PC.
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I love editorial sister!
Then I will try my best to keep the third update next week, but because I have to accompany my mother to the hospital, I can only say that I can do as much as possible.
Also consider whether to continue the overhaul once
Chapter completed!