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Comments at the end of the volume
First of all, this volume is written in a normal way, and I think there are a few highlights. But overall, I have too many things to express, but my writing style is limited and I can't write it out. This is also a common problem for most online writers. But in the final analysis, I am quite satisfied, at least not broken.
You should know that during the writing process, the outline of this volume changed more than once. Originally, I wanted to finish writing the Night King. But later I changed it to explore the Valyrian Peninsula and ended. As a result, I changed it back. This made the second half of the volume a little less smooth.
I have said before that Sassanne was my favorite character in the later stage. But I know that most readers don’t like watching her appear, so I deleted a lot of scenes and only explained it in the final postscript. Arya Stark and Daenerys are the same.
In addition, I saw some readers complaining in the book review area that the protagonist has too many abilities and is too complicated. And the application is not very good. I will explain it here.
First, the protagonist gained a lot of talent in the first world. But the upper limit of these abilities is very weak. I remember that in the Green volume, I wrote a detail. The protagonist has a palm-derived suction cup and climbing ability. But that ability is so weak that it cannot support his weight at all.
Most of his early talent abilities are like this. They are very weak, and they can only make him stronger than ordinary people. Apart from the ability of beast instinct, there are not many other applications.
In addition, I will explain his flame abilities. The arson monster in Green is not the kind you think, a magic creature that can manipulate flames. There are some mysterious sides, but they are very weak.
His ability is to secrete a high-ignition liquid in his body. By infiltrating the surface of the skin, then ignite it through static electricity on the surface of the body, it turns into a flame creature. The only fantasy place is that his skin is no different from that of a normal person, but it has fire resistance and will not be burned by his own flames.
Therefore, Su Yuan does not have the ability to manipulate flame elements. His flame release is formed by combining mental power and secretions in his body.
As for the thunder and lightning ability, it is now the real killer move. The strengthening of the royal bloodline is used on this. This is the protagonist's strongest ability at present. His thunder and lightning also have considerable effects on the divine creature Night King. However, Su Yuan has not had time to develop this ability in depth, so the power has not yet been shown.
Then there is the benefit of killing the Night King. First of all, the Night King has the divine nature of death, which is natural. A creature with the divine nature of death will not die completely, which is natural. So, don’t say that I suppress the protagonist’s ability or something. I have a basis for writing this. It is not forcibly suppressing the protagonist’s gains, so that he cannot obtain all the divine nature of the Night King.
The three-eyed crow did not explode its divine nature, but exploded a remnant soul because it was not dead at all. Its consciousness curled up into the remnant soul and became a special identification tool. This is one of the auxiliary props I prepared for the protagonist. As for whether it will wake it up in the future, it is just in my mind, but it will not be possible in a short period of time.
In short, this is the story in this volume. Whether it is in line with everyone's wishes or not, this is the story I want to write. I will write better in the next volume.
Finally, there are the protagonist's personal attributes and statistics on items.
ability:
Strengthen the comprehensive strengthening of hearing, vision, smell, touch, and body. These are the basic strengthening.
Talent ability:
The power of beasts (little man), wild beasts instinct, night vision (cat man), weather perception (frog), infrasonic positioning (bat), sound waves (dolphins and other deep-water fish), spit (swordfish), secretion of toxins (various snake orcs), heat source perception (snake), vibration wave sensing (spiders), flame control (arson monster), lightning control (electric shock monster), mental interference (primary).
Talents to be strengthened:
The secret inheritance of male witches, spiritual interference in the intermediate level, ice field.
thing:
Three cursed gold coins (can inspire people's inner ambitions), the heart of lava (enhanced version), the heart of tree spirit, two revolvers. Travel bags (built-in various necessities for daily life).
The package made of animal skin: one piece of Valyrian Steel Armor. Eight long swords of Valyrian Steel Swords (the reward promised by Changxia, Winter, Dark Sisters, Lady Caitlyn is tentatively named the peddler, and the other four are unnamed. They are used to interact with the characters in the future, and to highlight favorability in the future).
In addition, there are five or several Valyrian ingots and a piece of armor made of the skin of the fire earthworm. Now it is worn on the body.
Chapter completed!