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It's on the shelf, let's chat

It will be released at 12 noon and will be released for the fifth update. I will post three chapters at 12 o'clock later and two more chapters tonight.

This way, plus the free chapter of today's first update, today is considered 6 chapters.

The rules for adding updates after they are released.

One more update for ten thousand rewards.

200 monthly tickets plus one update.

The first subscription starts at 500, and every 200 subscriptions increase will be added.

I was very sad when it was released, because it was time to verify the true achievements of this book.

Before, whether it was recommendation votes, comments, or otherwise, the results of this book were not good, but in the end, it would be better to read the subscription. I also hope to have a surprise.

It's quite tiring to write this book.

After all, it is really troublesome to write a completely different setting system. If you write too many settings, there is no plot and no explanation of settings, everyone is confused.

In addition, this is my first book, and I have made many problems that novices should have.

I remember that when I threw the outline to my friend for more than 30 chapters, he read it roughly and said that I had committed the biggest problem when he first started writing books - he was too pursuing logic.

The novel pursues logic too much, which will lead to some plots that were originally exciting to turn into poisonous points.

I admit that I read novels too and know that if some plots pursue logic, then the pleasure will not be there. If you pursue pleasure, then the logic will be lost.

The readings, comments, recommendations and other situations in the book also prove this.

Everyone is calling it good in the first 10 chapters of this book, and the comments are very enthusiastic. The setting of bribing the world consciousness is even more unique, which is a highlight.

By the time the player's talent appeared in Chapter 15, some readers were confused.

What about my ice archery, my fireball technique? Why is the ice talent here cooler, and the fire talent here warmer, this is wrong.

Many readers can't accept it, comments, chapters and recommendation votes have dropped several steps at once.

The most popular part of this book is Chapter 21, and the protagonist is recognized by his classmates.

When my friend saw this, he asked me to delete and rewrite it. At that time, more than 30 chapters were short of words and could modify it. I would rather give Lu Lifang a halo of wisdom and a halo of blind people, so she would not recognize it.

I thought about it and rejected it.

Because the article describes an era of artificial intelligence explosion, you show your face online, even if you are masked, some of your body language is unique.

The protagonist was poor at that time and had to show up. If no one recognized him, he would have been wiser if he didn't have to bribe the world consciousness.

I have explained in the subsequent story of the protagonist in Chapter 21 that Da Yinyu is the open behind the scenes boss.

I was vaguely in the city, and I stood in front of you, calling me Boss Li, calling you an excellent employee, and I am cheating you, and you don’t know.

This is actually more satisfying than the so-called "behind-the-scenes boss" who has been hiding behind the scenes and is afraid of even having a meal.

However, readers who left at that time would not come back.

So far, 220,000 words.

In fact, the book 220,000 words has just begun, and a group of players have just stepped out of the novice village, and the development of the eternal plane has just begun.

This is also a disadvantage of writing a new setting system. I have to use some plots to explain the new setting here, which has led to the slowdown in the plot.

If it were the wizard stream, the magic stream, or the former archers, the setting of the knights, the 220,000-word plot would have long been released in the novice village.

This also caused some readers to lose.

I feel like I have obsessive-compulsive disorder, and I do my best to describe a world, and the logic of this world is to improve it as much as I can and knowledge.

Maybe it's the first book, I read it more heavily, it's my baby.

Subscribe, please, please write a thankless new setting system, and ask everyone for a subscription to encourage you.

Life presses me to the ground and rubs me, hoping that the world of novels will have a surprise.

6 updates today.

Just sauce.
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