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Speaking of which, I feel like I have been owing you a long time to finish this review. Today I finally made up my mind to give you an explanation. If anyone is waiting, Mo Yu thanks you for your waiting and also apologizes to you.

At the moment when I finished the finale, Mo Yu had a lot of things to say, but I didn’t know where to start for a while. Today, I became even more confused and had no idea what I should say, so I just thought about what I wanted to say.

First of all, let’s talk about the results. In the comments on the shelves, Mo Yu once mentioned that Jiuquan is Mo Yu who has entered this industry to write the best book. It is better than Wen Sheng. The manuscript fee for the first month of the shelves was close to 8,000 yuan. We also published traditional Chinese books, which can be said to be a qualitative leap. Overall, Mo Yu was satisfied with this result, but was not satisfied with this story.

If you are reading from Wen Sheng, you should know that Jiuquan’s book is actually a bit anxious. Mo Yu had already started writing a new book before Wen Sheng finished it, in order not to lose his energy, but the facts prove that this approach is actually a bit under consideration.

After all, Wen Sheng was very close to the end of the book, which also made Jiuquan feel a little anxious to write the beginning. In fact, two or three drafts were written in the middle, and they were all rewritten again and again due to various problems, which made Mo Yu lose the overall control of the story at the beginning.

Many book friends have left messages saying that Xia Sheng has problems. He does not have the cunning of an old monster who has lived for tens of thousands of years, nor does he have the lonely demeanor of an invincible master. Mo Yu has never explained this point, so let me talk about it here today.

As you all know, although Xia Sheng did spend a full 30,000 years in constant rebirth, he was cursed by fate and never lived to be 25 years old in every life. Therefore, in Mo Yu's heart, he was not an old monster at all, but was always just a boy.

Mo Yu believes that a person's maturity, or cunning and wisdom, is not only related to his experience, but also to his age. To put it more directly, it is related to his age.

There must be a big difference between an old monster who has lived for 100 years and a boy who has been reborn five times and lives to the age of 20 every time.

In the nine springs, Mo Yu chose to turn Xia Sheng into an eternal boy. He is always young and young, always passionate, and always has the impulse and enthusiasm that a boy should have.

So in Mo Yu's mind, Xia Sheng's character has never been a problem, and the real problem lies in the story itself.

It is undeniable that Jiuquan is indeed unfinished. Mo Yu must admit this point and does not shy away from it. Although perhaps many readers will choose to read this comment before reading the main text and give up this story, Mo Yu will also say this point here. After all, Mo Yu is indeed ashamed of all book friends.

There are many reasons for the unfinished ending, or the reason why Mo Yu chose to end this story so soon, is not to make excuses, but to Mo Yu still thinks that the reason should be told to everyone here.

One reason is that the traditional Chinese side told me that it needed to be completed. After thinking about it over and over again, I chose to complete the electronic version simultaneously. Of course, this is not the most important reason.

The most important reason is that Mo Yu is going to work. Friends who are familiar with Mo Yu know about Mo Yu's situation. New friends should be able to know in the single chapters such as the reviews on the shelves and know that Mo Yu was still studying for a master's degree when he was writing Jiuquan, but when you saw this passage, Mo Yu had already officially started work.

When Jiuquan wrote the finale, Mo Yu was 13 days away from reporting to the unit. In theory, he could write more content, but in fact, what he could write in more than ten days was already very limited, and Mo Yu was still completing another major event at that time, which was to write scripts for a film and television drama company.

Mo Yu mentioned before that he did not particularly want to live a life of nine to five, living a life of dying. Originally, Jiuquan's grades gave Mo Yu a lot of confidence, but this confidence was quickly defeated by reality. At the very least, Jiuquan only had a royalty fee of 2,000 yuan, and this amount of money would definitely not be able to support Mo Yu to continue writing, so Mo Yu chose to take a different approach and try writing scripts. Perhaps being a professional screenwriter is also a good choice. In this way, there will be more time left, and writing scripts and books can be done at the same time.

At that time, the script was very critical, so Mo Yu chose to finish Jiuquan. After all, he could still write a book after the book was finished, and the timing of the script was very important. If you can't grasp such an opportunity, Mo Yu would regret it for a long time.

After the script was finished, Mo Yu participated in the pre-job training at the unit for more than a month. Now Mo Yu has been working for a while and is new to him. He dares not make rash things, nor does he dare to write during work. In his spare time after get off work, he is used to modify the script. He has been revised to the seventh draft so far, so he has not spared his hands to write the book. He has been delayed again and again, until today.

Since that's the case, Mo Yu simply told everyone about the original setting. Of course, it cannot make up for the regrets in your heart, but it is also an explanation.

In Mo Yu's initial plan, Jiuquan still had at least two volumes of story to be written, that is, the number of characters set by Mo Yu's completion of Jiuquan is actually similar to that of Wen Sheng, both of which are about two million words.

The name of the next volume was originally called "Hanbi Jiangshan". Mo Yu was quite happy when he thought of this name, but unfortunately he couldn't use it in the end.

Half of the rivers are about the prince fleeing Luoyang with the help of Taoist Taiwei, reaching an agreement with the grassland people in Xiling, establishing a second Dajin regime, and demarcating the boundaries with the regimes of Zhao Chen and Xia Sheng. The Dajin Dynasty was divided. The demons took root south of the Shuo River, relying on the Shuo River as a defense line, and stopped the invasion of the north and ruled with Dajin. Xia Sheng served as a mission to the barbarians, relying on his former identity to form an alliance with the barbarian king.

At the same time, Mo Yuan married the demon princess. Nan Yuanyao, who felt betrayed, felt as if Nan Yuanyao was dead and decided to help Xia Sheng defeat the demon clan. On the other hand, in the Thorn Army, after Ye Jiang's death, General Discovery was originally scheduled to die in the battle to quell the Spring and Autumn Rebellion. Ye Xiao'e's reputation could not control the Thorn Army. Wu Tong, the two subordinates of Ye Jiang, chose to lurk in the southern border and attack Mo Yuan again and again. Shen Mu returned to Dajin in order to promise the general and helped Ye Xiao'e become the new Thorn Army commander step by step.

During this period, Xia Sheng went to Fenghuolin, who had imprisoned Xu Bei, and obtained the token, allowing Xu Qiu to leave the military power of the army, together with the intelligence power of the Thorn Army and Shantang, to counterattack the southern border in one fell swoop and defeat the demon clan.

The name of the last volume is not determined. The main content is about Yin Shizhen climbing to the top of the Judgment Office step by step. The war between the two regimes of Dajin officially began. At the same time, because Xia Sheng's achievements were so great, Zhao Chen became suspicious of Xia Sheng. Seeing that the scene five hundred years ago was about to repeat, Xia Sheng escaped with the help of Mu Chenyi and Ying Tianwu, the old brothers of the old brothers, and prepared to completely overthrow the two regimes of Dajin with his own strength and directly proclaim himself emperor to unify the world. As a result, the 25-year-old period was approaching. At the last moment, Xia Sheng comprehended the ultimate path and got the ninth fountain before he died. He defeated the grassland people and Zhao Hao regime in the west, destroyed the barbarians and Zhao Chen regime in the east, and dominated the world.

Well, after all, let me tell you some of the foreshadowing plots that have not been revealed in the article.

Yin Shizhen's teacher, Zhu Yinlin, was actually one of the murderers who killed Emperor Gaozong, and Zhu Yuanba, the general of the Northern Expedition.

Xia Sheng’s next spiritual beast will be the Tianxingyuan, the Sky-Treading Squirrel in the pure land of the Galaxy.

Wei Qiuyue is still alive.

Shangguan Wanqing, Bai Feng and Xie Fengjun will become the mainstay of Dajin's fight against the alien race.

The National Church will take the religious power to value all living beings as a requirement, forcing Zhao Chen to compromise, mobilize the National Church army and killer forces to help Zhao Chen quell the rebellion, but in the end, the National Church's ambition was discovered by Xia Sheng, and the layout was made layer by layer, coupled with Meng Qi's inner support, Ying Tianwu became a new generation of pope and re-elected the National Church.

With the help of Xia Sheng, Ye Jiang will make rapid progress in his cultivation, learn the sword technique of Duanyue, and join the battle with Xia Sheng and his father-son soldiers, and advance together.

There is another secret, that is, until the end of the book, I didn't think about what the ninth fountain of Xia Sheng should be called...

Well, after all, I have more or less explained to you. What should I say next? Let’s talk about the story of the book itself, and the people in the story.

This time, we don’t say every character like Wen Sheng’s final comment. Let’s simply choose a few characters that Mo Yu prefers.

Of course, the one who ranks first is Emperor Jin.

Emperor Jin is actually a very interesting person. He gave himself a posthumous title when he was alive. He endured and planned for more than a hundred years to become the greatest king in the world, but he died when he was the most powerful. He did not lose to his own era, but lost to a period of cause and effect five hundred years ago.

The plot of the Heaven Sacrifice Ceremony is a plot that Mo Yu wrote well in Jiuquan. Of course, the creativity of the layout itself was not Mo Yu's first creation, but the shadow of other books, such as Mao Ni's Dadongshan, and the dancing Snow Night, etc., but no matter what, I am very satisfied with the writing, and I hope you can enjoy it.

Unfortunately, after the plot of the Heaven Sacrifice Ceremony ended, Mo Yu had decided to finish the book quickly, so the subsequent plot seemed a bit scattered, and it was impossible to explain the relationship between Emperor Jin's death and the fate of the entire Dajin Dynasty, which also became a regret in Mo Yu's heart.

In addition to Emperor Jin, Qin Xiaohua is of course worth talking about.

From a certain perspective, Qin Xiaohua is the first powerful minister created by Mo Yu. With him, the Qin family and Shantang are there. Even the powerful Emperor Jin can only frame him with conspiracy and tricks, and use Shantang to fight him, and dare not simply kill him with one sword.

Unfortunately, Qin Xiaohua is not a pure loyal minister, or he never had the opportunity to become a loyal minister, because of Xia Sheng and Luoqiu. After all, the existence of Shantang started many, many years ago to overthrow the Dajin Dynasty. Therefore, during the Great Sacrifice Ceremony, even though he guessed that Emperor Jin had countless trump cards to suppress him, he still took that step back when the high priest came.

That was not the first step for Qin Xiaohua to retreat, because if it were not for his support and secretly supported in the rebellion case more than ten years ago, how could the children of several aristocratic families have the courage to overturn the emperor's dragon throne? It's a pity that Qin Xiaohua failed that year, so the Qin family lacked a Qin war, so Qin Yan was displaced here, so the Ye family and the Xu family broke with the Qin family one after another.

It was from that time that Emperor Jin had a murderous intention to kill the ancestor of the Qin family, the entire Qin family, and the entire Shantang.

Compared with the Qin family or Shantang, Mo Yu, other forces in the Dajin Dynasty, were not well portrayed, such as the Judgment Department, the Seventy-Two Sects, and the Thorn Army. Due to the length, they only wrote a rough idea. The only one who spent some more writing was the Chunqiu Academy.

There are many characters in the Chunqiu Academy. I think the two vice presidents, Tang Zi'an and Wei Qiuyue, have the most weight, even surpassing the dean. In addition, Hu Shuo should have been a character worthy of writing in Mo Yu's plan. Unfortunately, this plot of the barbarian attack on the mountain was finally overwritten.

However, since we talk about Chunqiu Academy, we naturally have to mention Xia Sheng's fellow disciple, the young man who was both friends and enemies of him, Mo Yuan.

Friends in the group all know that Mo Yuan is the supporting role of the leader Feng Yuxin. At the beginning, the role of Mo Yuan existed to love and kill Xia Sheng, so before he appeared, Xia Sheng killed his sister.

Regarding Mo Yuan, Mo Yu once used a lot of writing and ink to create this character. That is, during the Spring Examination Competition, many book friends at that time had a lot of opinions and thought that I had written Mo Yuan as the protagonist, but in fact, the plot of the Spring Examination Competition laid a lot of foreshadowing for the subsequent plot.

For example, the relationship between Mo Yuan and Nan Yuanyao, the relationship between Nan Yuanyao and Kuimu, the relationship between Mo Yuan and the demon princess Zi Ling, the appearance of the geniuses of major sects, and the dilemma of the Spring and Autumn Academy, etc.

These foreshadowings were originally for the Spring and Autumn Academy encounters Fu; Mo Yuan, Nan Yuanyao, and Kui Mu escaped; Zi Ling rescued Mo Yuan and the Mo family's rebellion in the end, but unfortunately, based on the length, Mo Yu finally abandoned these plots and explained them in a few simple sentences, and the Mo family betrayed.

But even so, in the battle of Mocheng, Mo Yu still did his best to write down Marshal Ye's death and the Mo family's rebellion in the completeness. Perhaps it was not heroic enough, but at least it was complete enough.

For Mo Yu himself, his preference for the character Mo Yuan is obvious. After all, Mo Yuan is one of the few super handsome men in the world, right? Ah...

Mo Yu was joking in the group before that I would become the first author to open a harem for supporting roles. Although it was not completely realized in the end, it was probably a matter of counting that there were really many girls who were related to Mo Yuan.

For example, Nan Yuanyao, Ziling, and Jiang Qiqi, they are really handsome and treated differently...

Although Mo Yu spent so much writing to create the role of Mo Yuan, if I think about it carefully, I have not described Mo Yuan’s past in detail, such as why he left Mo City and ran outside Luoyang City to Kaihua Building and Gambling House, such as how deep his relationship with his sister Mo Lin, Mo Yu can only express his regrets about this.

By the way, everyone probably knew it. In the end, Mo Yuan did not die. He was the one who lay in the deep-sea blood coffin in the finale.

Speaking of the ending, there is a character who may not know who it is, so I will explain it here, that is, the master of the Taoist temple who has not known how long he has lived, prays for blessings to the starry sky every day, but never dies. This person is Taiwei Taoist.

As mentioned earlier, Taiwei Taoist should have a very important person in the late stage of Jiuquan, because he was the fuse that caused the division of Dajin. Of course, his original intention was good, because even if the division was divided, no matter whether Zhao Chen's orthodox or Zhao Hao's pseudo-jin was destroyed, the remaining one could still pass on the fire of human beings and continue to survive.

This plot should be very exciting in Mo Yu's mind, but because of the deletion of Da Jin's split scene, the importance of Taiwei Taoist is much lower. I continue to feel sorry for it...

This time Mo Yu didn't plan to talk about the protagonist, including the heroine, so let me talk about Pei Yuan in the end.

This old man Mo Yu likes it very much. He has a high level of cultivation, strong swordsmanship, and his status can be considered transcendent. Although he has not been able to become a saint, his personality is really pleasing.

Pei Yuan was Xia Sheng's teacher and the mainstay of the Pei family. He had an indescribable grudge with Xia Sheng, but in the end he chose to let go.

Pei Yuan's sword is naturally very powerful, but in fact, he has not used all his strength to use his sword in the text. However, his discussion on swordsmanship with Xia Sheng under the starry sky made Xia Sheng willing to worship him as his master, which has shown that he is worthy of being a master of swordsmanship.

Pei Yuan is undoubtedly a strong man of a generation. If it weren't for Pei Xu and Mu Chenyi, he would be the most powerful swordsman in the Dajin Dynasty today, even surpassing Xia Sheng. But it was precisely because his sword was not as good as Pei Xu and Mu Chenyi that Mo Yu let it hide his clumsiness. After all, compared to his sword, Mo Yu still likes him.

Friends who are familiar with Mo Yu know that Mo Yu has always written very restrainedly about the roles he likes, so Pei Yuan has few scenes, but he is very outstanding, isn’t he?

For the same reason, Mo Yu actually likes the high priest very much, Mu Bei very much, Bai Feng, Xie Fengjun, Qin Ran and other characters, but we won’t go into details.

Next, since it is a thank you, it is naturally time to hear the thank you.

First of all, I need to thank several editors of Mo Yu, for Wutong, who worked hard for Jiuquan at the beginning, for Qilin, who took over Jiuquan later, for Tianyou, who had left Qidian, and for the lovely sister of the adventurer who endured my countless times. I won’t say much about pretentious words, after all, we will still meet again in the future, right?

Then thank the three leaders of Jiuquan.

There is no need to say more about Yang Tian laughing at Yang Meng. Friends who are familiar with the author Jun should know him. However, Yang Meng hasn't bubbling in the group for a long time. Remember to contact me when I go back to China. I will definitely have a good drink with you.

Thanks to the leader of the QQ, this is the most low-key and mysterious leader in Jiuquan. He has never appeared since he was put on the shelves and joined the league. The reader group has not joined. He did not appear when he was carrying out the traditional Chinese book delivery activity. He has never seen the leader of the Mihuo. It makes Mo Yu feel grateful and regretful. After all, he has never communicated. I hope you can see this remark. After all, Mo Yu still owe you a set of traditional Chinese books.

Thanks to the leader Wen Yanruhua, that is, Fengyuxin. He is not only the leader of Jiuquan, but also the moderator, and is also the group manager of Mo Yu's fan group. Although this guy is relatively idle and has always lived a life of pure heart and lack of desires and not following the dust, Mo Yu knows the efforts he has put in Jiuquan. Thank you for your love, thank you for the tea you sent, and thank you for this fate.

Thanks to the author's assistant, the boss's wife Wutiaomeizi. Although Wutiaomeizizizi didn't appear in the group, his help to Mo Yu and his help to Jiuquan's plot is unmatched. Ahem, the ranking is a little behind this time, I won't be beaten...

Thanks to Zhu V Yun, this name may be unfamiliar to everyone. After all, he has not entered the fan group, rarely leaves messages in the book review area, and does not give much reward, but he is the ticket king for more than half a year during the Jiuquan serialization period! If Mo Yu remembers correctly, from Jiuquan's release to the end of the month, the ticket king for every month has been Zhu V Yun! Never fell behind! From Wen Sheng to Jiuquan, the two books combined, Zhu V Yun has been the ticket king for more than one year! The support and love for Mo Yu are beyond words! What kind of virtue can Mo Yu be so valued? Thank you for your uninterrupted support. Fortunately, I can meet you. I hope we will see you again in the future.

Thanks to Shen Mu, thanks to S. Mr. Mo Yu, these two guys, have rarely seen Mo Yu in the group, and I don’t know where to talk about girls. It may be because of my different routine. Anyway, with our friendship and the friendship between you two, I don’t mind being put together, right... In short, I am very grateful for your unyielding Mo Yu and strong support for Jiuquan after Wen Sheng. Thank you.

Thank you solemnly for Biluo HuangquanⅫ. Biluo Huangquan, the book friend forgot when it appeared, but there is no doubt that Biluo Huangquan is the most common thanks to all chapters of this book. Biluo Huangquan is not the top fan list, but the book friend who rewards the most frequently. His name appears almost every chapter. Mo Yu was very moved by this. There were even a few times when setting up automatic releases in advance, Mo Yu was wondering whether to simply write the 100 reward of Biluo Huangquan first in the article? Perhaps it was a coincidence, this id is almost exactly the same as the name of Xia Sheng’s first spiritual spring. This is fate, isn’t it? Thank you for your support, and I hope we can meet again in the future.

Thank you Gong Changzhang and Xiaogeque. Both of you are Mo Yu's old friends. The former is nicknamed Xiao Tadpole, and the latter is usually called Xiaoyu. Although they don't talk much, Mo Yu knows that you have been supporting me and supporting me. Even when Jiuquan writes so badly, thank you for your patience and tolerance. Thank you.

Thanks to satellite gz, this is a new friend who appeared in Jiuquan. Satellite is a very interesting person. Although this guy has not joined the group, he often bubbling in the book review area and has made indelible contributions to the activity of the book review area. Fortunately, Mo Yu has had many exchanges with satellites. Satellites are also not stingy with rewards. They are still in the top ten of the fan list. Unfortunately, they promised that your supporting role had not been realized. This book will definitely give you a good character later!

Speaking of dragon support, Mo Yu is very ashamed. The dragon support who promised before the book was opened did not appear in Jiuquan, because Mo Yu originally planned to use Wudu as the capital of the demon clan, but from the beginning to the end, humans failed to step into the territory of the demon clan, and the name Wudu did not appear in the main text. I am very sorry. In the next book, Moyu will definitely give you a good dragon support!

Thanks to VT City, VT is a good guy. It seems to have opened a milk tea shop or something. I made an appointment with Xiaoyu before, but it ended in failure. I feel sorry for you. Otherwise, there will be another pair of good friends in the world. Hahahaha, I know that many people are very dissatisfied with Jiuquan's ending, VT is one of them. Mo Yu is very sorry for this, but I know even more that what you are really dissatisfied is that your supporting role failed to explode Mo Yuan, and only stabbed him in the thigh. Cough cough, I will try to fulfill this book for you...

Thanks to Baima Xiaoxifeng, who was once very active in the book review area, and it was really a matter of saying that he really rewarded 10,000 points of mother coins when he made a supporting role. He is really a good man who can do what he said. Other supporting roles, look at him!

Thank you Sun and Moon Qinghui, thank you Xingwu Buer, thank you Little Walnut, although you dive in the group and dive in the book review area, you are almost diving to the center of the earth, but Mo Yu knows that you are all silently supporting me, supporting Jiuquan, and supporting the insignificant dream of the author Jun, thank you! In addition, Qinghui and Xingwu, I have put you two and Little Walnut together, and why don’t you send me two red envelopes?

Thanks to the mini funny guy, as he is, this guy is really a funny guy, and the most funny thing is that he actually asked his teacher for a supporting role, that is, Meng Qi. Yes, he is a female supporting role. However, in the book review competition, my favorite is the funny one. Unfortunately, this guy was too lazy and did not continue to update it. It made me look forward to it for so long. It was even more serious than my unfinished one! Thank you for the joy you brought to the group, thank you for your support for Mo Yu in such a funny way, thank you.

Thanks to Yuwen and Yi, it sounds a bit magical. Xiaoyi is a senior fan of Wen Sheng, but he lost contact later because of the college entrance examination. Unexpectedly, it suddenly appeared when Jiuquan was about to end. What Mo Yu didn't expect was that Xiaoyi was actually a girl. She was really shocked every day. This is the most special! Thanks to Xiaoyi for his unchanging support, I hope we can see you again after this book.

Thank you for being like a different world. If you have to choose an opponent who competes with Biluo Huangquan in terms of reward frequency, it is undoubtedly only like a different world. Their names appear on the thank you list at the end of the text many times. Look at how destined you are, just be together, haha...

Thank you for the arrears, thank you for the Tang Dynasty scholar Lang, thank you for the sky Xingwu, are all old friends. Although you have less bubbles now, you have always been very grateful for Mo Yu's support. I hope you will come to the group to chat more after you finish your work. It's better for everyone to be lively. Everyone is all their own people. I believe you won't mind giving thanks in parallel. Hehe, mainly because after writing this, Mo Yu found that there are still many people to thank, and we need to speed up the progress...
To be continued...
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