There is still a period after the period, but unfortunately it is not the main text, but a single chapter.

I haven't written a single chapter for a long time, so why are you a little excited?

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Talk about things.

Look at it...

If you don't ask, no one says it's good or bad.

You have to ask before the problem can surface.

I read the comments from yesterday one by one. Some book friends made suggestions very pertinent, such as the practice system is not clear.

This is my fault. My writing habit is that I don’t want to use the entire paragraph of explanatory text to explain the background. I always want to rub the background and settings into the story, which makes the words a little bit fragmented.

Correct immediately.

I spent a day today and wrote a single chapter on the settings that appear now and the settings that appear in the future, and immediately posted them in the work related.

Mobile users can see it by flipping up the directory.

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In addition, some people say that there are too many pits to be dug and are afraid of problems that cannot be filled.

Don't worry about this. All pitfalls are based on the set story framework, and they are in a strict manner. Moreover, the first wave of plots connecting fragmented clues will arrive soon, please wait patiently for a few days.

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To be honest, I have never thought about this before about the lack of fairy spirit.

Maybe it’s a habit that portraying characters is too vulgar, right? Let me think about it carefully, do you need to write deliberately and be fairy-like?

(In fact, it is simple, even those who cultivate immortals don’t speak human words.)

Another possibility is that these characters that appear now must be close to the people, because most of them are the teams of future ancestors.

Okay, let’s tell the truth. In fact, the preliminary preparations have not been completed yet, and the real story has not begun yet...

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Regarding the problem that the setting of the rustic bun is not thorough enough.

I also thought about this, and wanted to write something more, but then I held it back. I will explain it immediately.

The current setting is that Yun Beige just looks very rustic, but in fact he is very smart, but he just has no chance to use it. When he ends the section of Wen Sheng Tomb, when he sees Jun Xinyou, he will explain it all.

As for why the image of the opening design and the butt curtain are suddenly gone, it is a suspense.

I can only say that I will use it at the right time, not now.

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Finally, I want to say, that's right!!

If you have any questions, please immediately raise them, and if you don’t feel good, please immediately criticize them.

Have you forgotten that I am a new author? When did you be so tolerant of new authors? What did you spray me like during the Song Dynasty?

I haven't written much after being stopped for more than a year. I don't know what readers like to read now and what is popular online articles.

If you look at it with your head down every day, it will be useless to use the new author's intention to open this book.

Practice writing, write whatever you feel, and then touch what you write now to make money!!

If you don’t say anything, I won’t achieve any purpose. It’s better to go back and use the heels to make soup with the soup.

Right?

I treat "Tubi" as my backyard. As for me, I learn and write while listening to your opinions. I can change it if I can, and if I can't change it, I will be fine.

As for you, through it, you can understand some background indirectly, string together the front and back, and prepare for future stories.

I would like to praise me a few words, as if it was not the case with Tang Yi and Wu Ning, I would have the pleasure of seeing it first.

If you feel uncomfortable watching it, you will scold it!

I am so generous, when did I get angry with my book friends because of being scolded?

What if I scold you correctly, what if I change it?

Don’t let “The Land” become a joke that a certain author makes a small entourage but writes it as a bad story.

Even if it turns into a bad story, I have to pull out a tube of pus from it, right?

Dear to you.

Thank you!

Talk more, look for more problems, and talk nonsense!
Chapter completed!