What I recommend to you today is the work of the great writer Ze Mei Shu Yan, which has been serialized with 1.3991 million words.

"Chao Wei Tian She Lang", a great writer with sly eyebrows and rat eyes.

Category: History-Two Jin, Sui and Tang Dynasties.

【Introduction】

In the morning he was a farmhouse man, and in the evening he ascended to the Emperor's Hall.

Tianbao of the Tang Dynasty, Gu Qing walked out of the smoke and dust in cloth clothes. On the main road of Chang'an Imperial City, he looked at the row upon row of gorgeous palaces, one step at a time, two steps at a time, and lotuses grew at every step.

He gradually grasped the pulse of this powerful dynasty, and also saw the frustrated and gloomy face of Li Longji.

Leaning down, Gu Qing smiled and said to Li Longji: "Your Majesty, is it time for you to take the Zen position? It would be great to be the Supreme Emperor. I am willing to share your worries and make decisions for your Majesty in the affairs of the world."

[Golden Five Chapters]

Chapter 1: A Stranger in an Lonely Village. The protagonist Gu Qing is a member of the Traveling Party and becomes an ordinary boy in the village. However, he beats up the village bully Ding Erlang. Ding Dalang learns the news and comes to take revenge. The two brothers are shot together.

He fell into the opponent's trap, and his arm was even broken. The protagonist's attack was not as vicious as usual.

Chapter 2, past and present lives. The protagonist was an orphan in his past life and traveled through time after being drunk. In this life, he is also like an orphan, his parents have disappeared. The villagers are ignorant, and the best way to deal with evil people is to be more evil, so he is not afraid that the Ding brothers will come again to seek revenge.

Chapter 3: Poverty. The rice at home could not last for a month, and even though they cooked the rice, there was no food. The protagonist went to dig a hole in the back mountain to get some game, but was told by his friend that he might not be able to catch the prey, so he might as well hunt it.

Fish. The protagonist dug coal.

Chapter 4, Feng Shui Treasure Land. Coal is an important material and has great uses. The protagonist actually had evil intentions and wanted to bury his friend. Of course, this idea was not put into action. He and his friends decided to go down the mountain to catch fish. But what happened

It really scared my friends.

Chapter 5, The light at the bottom of the valley. A friend caught a lot of fish and shrimps and gave them all to the protagonist as a thank you for not killing him. The protagonist confessed to him that he had some amnesia, but he would never swallow his anger in the future.

It's just that the current life is still difficult, and the future path is still unclear.

【Brief review】

He is a great writer with stern eyebrows and rat eyes. He is the author of many fine works such as "The Idle Man of Zhenguan" and "The Hypocrite of the Ming Dynasty". The collection of the former is as high as 330,000 and the number of fans is 510,000.

The new book "Chao Wei Tian She Lang" was released on June 1, 2020. The first order was 1,400, the starting collection was 37,700, the bookstore collection was 3,094, the number of fans was 84,200, and there were 8 alliance leaders.

This book achieved the lowest score among all his works, and was also the only one that did not achieve high-quality results.

Thinking about it, this great writer should have realized that this book is really a complete failure.

Through trial reading, I also discovered some problems.

The early preparations are too long, and it is difficult to see the excitement from the golden five chapters. For the history of the time-travel theme, there are five chapters. There is no explanation of the system and personal abilities, but a lot of pen and ink is spent on the protagonist punishing the bullies in the village.

Digging a hole for hunting, digging up coal, catching fish with friends, and repeatedly emphasizing the protagonist's orphan nature, highlighting his concept of using violence to fight violence.

Let’s not talk about whether this concept is correct or not, and whether it is suitable for today’s troubled times. The rhythm alone does not reflect obvious characteristics, and it is very dragging.

Failure to pick up the pace will make the story very boring, and impatient readers may choose to leave after reading only three chapters.

In the book, there are a lot of little humors and cleverness, as well as modern words, which actually do not achieve the real effect of livening up the atmosphere, but are a bit embarrassing.

Of course, the writing style is very good and the writing experience is relatively rich. The subsequent plot may be more exciting as it unfolds.

But I still feel that if there are no bright spots in the early stage, it will be difficult to attract the recognition of new readers.

Also, the title of the book is really unremarkable!

【Summarize】

Writing is not easy, but you have to practice it and cherish it!

I am Cang Yiwei, and I take "Cang's Ramblings" with a grain of salt!
Chapter completed!