Chapter 66 Testimonials
Chapter 66 Remarks on the launch
Author: Kaka No. 3
Chapter 66 Remarks on the launch
It was supposed to be the day to put it on the shelves, but today I am writing and writing, sitting in front of the computer, unable to write a single word.
The original idea was that the protagonist would pull Luo Qing into the darkness, and then use the remaining power inside to launch a terrifying spiritual attack from pure darkness on Luo Qing. In the end, the seabird's body shook, and Luo Qing was frightened.
Trembling, in the end the protagonist's avatar pretended to be a debt collector, relying on the home field advantage and using his power to successfully inflict a serious blow to Luo Qing's spirit! He was unable to get back up again.
Then the protagonist took out the Book of Black Hell (translating this book will cause severe mental damage like a fire rack), asked Luo Qing to translate it, and then gave him a second terrifying mental critical attack, making Luo Qing feel even more frightened.
Painful! In the end, the protagonist ends the meeting. Under the shock and worry of the two, he gains some knowledge of beast control and the contents of the Book of Hell!
But the more I think about it, the more I feel that this is wrong, this is not good, this is a failed design, at least in this book, in the context of the exploration with Venus, the appearance of the "chat group" messes up the rhythm, and it doesn't work at all.
Any necessity will only make this adventure novel nondescript, and I am not capable of controlling this kind of chat group.
The theme of this book should be the lamp and the blade, the exploration of various unknown places, and the adventure of a young man holding a sword.
The four chapters I wrote in the past two days were so bad that when I was writing today, all I could think about was reopening a new book and continuing to use this worldview and golden fingers to write a book about the beginning of "The Boatman on the Ghost Sea".
But after thinking about it, I decided to continue writing it, at least for a while. I have thought a lot about the abilities and name of the protagonist of this book. I personally think the beginning of Heihe Prison is good...
These four chapters are really not well written and will be deleted. They will start again from the time when the protagonist takes over the mission of Hua Jiu Weng and understands the "Attachment of Black Fire".
It is also the beginning of the night before the blizzard and the criminal chapter.
It has caused some reading difficulties for everyone who has read this. I will try to read more tomorrow.
Chapter completed!