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Chapter 131 Priceless Treasure

Author: Flying Boat Looking at the Moon

Tang Jialin closed home at night and started writing copywriting. Her videos were basically output in language, and the manuscripts must be solid. She also hopes to give some support and encouragement to those who have the same experience, and it is best to have a sense of power.

The requirements are so high that it is inevitable to delete and modify it when writing. Tang Jialin wrote until midnight before finally writing a generally satisfactory first draft.

The next morning, Yu Lang came to work as a free clerk again. We all worked together for breakfast. Tang Jialin opened the document on her mobile phone and asked Yu Lang to help her find faults.

"I really picked out the problem. I won't let me come tomorrow, right?" Yu Lang joked.

"If you say the opposite, you can't pick it out. You won't use it tomorrow." Tang Jialin said with one hand on her hips and said in the boss' tone.

Yu Lang: “…”

Tang Jialin stuffed her phone into his hand and patted him on the shoulder: "Don't be afraid, take out your high standards and high requirements, and review the first draft."

This was the norm when they worked together before. She wrote copywriting, and he reviewed the manuscript and put forward a lot of opinions, and she went back to revise it.

Yu Lang read it through first, then went back to the beginning, slowly swiping the screen, and said, "Then I'll be blunt."

Tang Jialin sat up straight unconsciously: "Yes."

"I think 'Don't try to confront rumor-mongers on the Internet and prove their innocence to avoid falling into the whirlpool of Internet debate'. This view is particularly good, but we should explain a few more words to avoid the audience feeling allused and offended."

Tang Jialin said: "I originally wrote a passage to explain it, but when I read it, it feels too long and affects the overall rhythm."

"Is there any manuscript in that version?"

"..." The dead memory suddenly attacked, and Tang Jialin said speechlessly, "It doesn't have to be played so thoroughly."

Yu Lang smiled: "Let's try to change it here. I think we can explain a few more sentences. If the film is long, it's OK to cut it off."

He continued to say the next place, "I know you want to encourage people who have the same experience to take legal weapons to protect themselves, but everyone encounters different situations and their own situations. I personally think that the next few words are a little bit..."

Yu Lang hesitated for a moment, but decided to express his true feelings: "Sense of slogans."

"What sentences?"

Yu Lang gestured on the screen with his finger: "Just this part."

It was the part where Tang Jialin wanted to highlight her sense of power. She turned to Cao Xuan and asked her friends to come and read this passage.

"I want to tell you that times have changed. Although people's words are terrifying, we women do not lack the power to defeat them, especially we have the weapon of law. The process of rights protection may not be so smooth, and the results may not be satisfactory. But only when more and more victims swing the sword of the law to the rumor-mongers can they deter the rumor-mongers..."

When Tang Jialin heard Cao Xuan read this, she couldn't help but interrupt: "Okay, I really have to change it." She frowned and read it silently. "I have written several drafts over and over again. It is always difficult to make the words round and it seems that no matter how you say it, there are loopholes."

Seeing that they both frowned and thought, Cao Xuan couldn't help but say, "I think it's pretty good."

Tang Jialin shook her head: "There should not be such pressure on the victims. People who are in the rumored situation are under great pressure."

Yu Lang thought, "I don't think you need to express encouragement in your words anymore, because this kind of words that are said to many people can easily become incitement and the standards are not easy to grasp. And I think your actual actions themselves are already a very positive encouragement."

"It makes sense." Tang Jialin nodded.

Giving strength to others does not necessarily mean being generous or being worthy. Gentleness and firmness are also a kind of strength.

Tang Jialin had a new idea and turned on the computer to start modifying.

Yu Lang wrote a passage on his mobile phone for Tang Jialin's reference in the previous part he thought he should explain a few more sentences.

Tang Jialin thought he wrote pretty well, so she adopted it with a little modification, and then showed Yu Lang a paragraph that he had almost rewritten.

"I feel very warm after seeing it." Yu Lang gave thumbs up with both hands, "Perfect."

Tang Jialin read the whole manuscript several times, did some revisions, and then decided to shoot it in the store after it closed tonight.

Yu Lang wanted to stay for help, but she refused without hesitation: "I just want to tell it to the camera, and I don't need help." And she felt that having someone else would affect her mood and rhythm.

"Then I'll be waiting in the car outside, I'm afraid you'll be recording too late." Yu Lang insisted.

Tang Jialin felt that she had a car, and there would be nothing wrong with Cao Xuan, but she insisted so much that she thought about it and asked him to stay and wait in the kitchen.

"It's so cold outside, you have to turn on the air conditioner in the car." If you accidentally get carbon monoxide poisoning, it's not a joke.

So Yu Lang stayed a little longing until the night closed.

After cleaning and the clerks left, Tang Jialin took out the shooting equipment and asked Yu Lang and Cao Xuan to help adjust the lights. She also arranged the blackboard used as a telescope, leaving Cao Xuan to help her look at the machine and started shooting.

Yu Lang stood behind the curtain and heard Tang Jialin slowly introduce how she discovered the rumors she had encountered and how she dealt with.

"After calling the police, many friends I knew came to ask for concern and suggested that I send a video to explain the situation, but I have been insisting on waiting for the police investigation and handling results.

"Because from some of the hot online events I have observed, once the rumored party can't help but express his innocence or prove his innocence, it will inevitably fall into the whirlpool of online debate.

"We are all ordinary netizens. When we encounter such a thing, we will definitely be a little skeptical about the parties involved. Without the official investigation results, we can only choose the party that makes us believe more.

"And no one can be impeccable in the statements on the Internet, because a few words of verbal ambiguity have caused countless misunderstandings. So I think that since I have called the police, the platform has also deleted and blocked the spreading information, so I just need to wait for the police investigation results.

"Nothing can prove a person's innocence better than an official notice."

When Tang Jialin said this, she stopped and drank a sip of water, then talked about the police's investigation and handling results, and thanked the police for their hard work.

Then she sorted out the correct response process after being spread, including what advice did the lawyer provide when she went to see a lawyer?

Yu Lang listened to the voice, as if he had seen her talking in front of the camera, and couldn't help but smile.

Recently, he often feels that every day he passes, he seems to know Tang Jialin better and love her more.

She was like a treasure that was hidden very deeply. The one that was first revealed was just a pearl. He was attracted by the pearl and got closer step by step. After having it for a while, he thought she was really just a pearl.

Until the treasure left disappointed and he kept chasing and staying, he gradually discovered that there were gold and jade, gems, and so many glittering advantages behind the pearl.

She is a priceless treasure.

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