【Summary of this volume】
Let me talk about it first, today will be five chapters.
Because I spent a day conceiving the plot of the next volume yesterday, I only figured out a general idea and racked my brains, and I had no spare time to write.
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The following is the summary text:
After two months, the Beijing paper with nearly 700,000 words has finally been completed, and I can breathe a sigh of relief.
There shouldn't be such a long roll in the future...
I had expected this volume to be written so difficult.
Because this is a Beijing scroll (serious face), the so-called storm of all directions meet Zhongzhou, all forces must appear in the capital, and all contradictions must be revealed, either open or hidden.
If there is no explanation before or no preparation, a terrible force pops up in the middle, it will be laughed at by readers.
Moreover, after writing about one million words, what Mr. Zhao wants to do, the route he takes, and the views he needs to uphold must be clarified one by one, whether detailed or omitted.
If there is no explanation or preparation in the previous article, I will suddenly shout in the middle of the process, and I will make a revolution, I will be laughed at by readers.
Furthermore, the main characters who should appear must also be shown, either the main or the second.
If there is no explanation before or no preparation, a heroine will pop up in the middle of the process... I guess the reader will be very happy.
Well, there are still many unspoken characters in this book. The next volume is another new version of the ship that you have never played before.
Therefore, Mr. Zhao Hao and his wife came to Beijing with so many tasks, and there is a huge problem with the Beijing paper, that is, it has no natural main line! Ah! Ah!
The main line of the Nanjing paper is that father and son get rid of poverty and become rich, son complete their original accumulation, and father passes the imperial examination. Everyone and things are written around these two lines. In addition, at the beginning of the story, there are not so many characters and tasks, and naturally the rhythm is bright and the steps are light, and the writing is extremely concise.
But what is there in Beijing? Zhao Shouzheng passed the Jinshi? That is not a line, but a point. The love story between his father and godmother? That is not the main line.
What should we Mr. Zhao do? Are you in the winter every day?
With the superposition of the above problems, I still want to write them interesting and fascinating?
Omg, it’s hard to write books for death!
Therefore, the Beijing City Volume is destined to be a very special volume. When I first started writing it, the monk's mood could be imagined.
That's just a charge...
To be honest, the monk wrote this volume was extremely tired. He had a blank mind for many times. He had been facing the screen for a long time and could not write a word.
That is, everyone's support and family members' understanding and understanding made me persevere.
Don’t know what to write every day? Can’t think of interesting plots? Then think hard.
One chapter takes too much time, and you don’t have time to sleep in five chapters a day? Then don’t sleep.
Finally, I worked hard and ended this volume successfully.
Looking back at this volume, all the tasks that need to be completed have been completed, and several successful characters have been created, which also tells the story interestingly and vividly. Considering the difficulty of this volume, I think it can be worth 90 points.
Of course there are also some unsatisfactory things, mainly starting from the imperial examination, because the story is tightened all of a sudden because of the addition of the inverted Xu line.
This is of course a good thing, and it will make the story good. But this cannot be completely integrated with the important task of this volume - "building the overall structure of the story and setting the tone for the whole book".
If two narrative lines are divided into two narrative lines, it will dilute the main line and add too many cumbersome plots. If you write that way, it is estimated that this volume will exceed 800,000 words.
In order to keep the story coherent, I never switched the narrative line until Mr. Xu retired and Mr. Zhao was carried home, and Zhao Hao left Beijing immediately, so I explained what I should have to explain.
The problem arises here. This leads to a revolving transition a few days before leaving Beijing. Of course, it is impossible to tell stories by turning around, making jokes will prolong this passage. So I can only deal with it like this.
This is really awesome, and it's heartbreaking.
Fortunately, all the tasks have been completed and the stage has been built, so the next few volumes will be much easier to write.
In addition, I spent a day yesterday to conceive a new volume. Although there was only a general idea, the long-lost sense of lightness has come back!
The main line is that it is so thoughtful and easy to write, and the monk couldn't help but burst into tears.
I hope the Suzhou script can be written more excitingly and more popular.
By the way, I'll update it at 8 o'clock in the future. Although twelve o'clock is friendly to me, the readers are not friendly to me...
Chapter completed!