Posted by: Wuqing Laobai

The love I had been talking to a book for a year and a half, and finally, it ended. My lover left and sighed...

Fortunately, a new beauty is about to appear, and you can start a new relationship. The old ones don’t go, the new ones don’t come. Look forward to the new book of the old D!

I hope it's a beauty, amen!

reply:

Lao Bai, I am very happy that you came out of the dark room. The new book is Oriental Fantasy. Well, there will be more beauties. I always think that foreign beauties are always separated by a layer, and it is also a lot of regrets to write.

Posted by: Long and jammed road

It has become a habit to look at badges every day. I remember that it seems that the update is only once. Such old D is touching and admirable. Tomorrow the sun rises, and there are badges to see???

reply:

Of course there will be some reading, but the badge comes to an end. Soon, there will be a new story. Old D will continue to insist on stable updates, not to mention the explosion, but will be very stable.

Posted by: Xiaopang's Chocolate

Like most books on this site, the brilliant beginning then becomes an upgrade stream. The characters with many scenes in the front gradually became NPCs.

From the previous work and this work, we can see that the 13 emperors lack the control of the big scenes, and the handling of emotions is not satisfactory.

A person's characteristics can be shown in just a few strokes of portraying characters, but if you need more interaction, you will be unable to do so. Therefore, because of the later story, the character of a stunning character becomes completely like another person. Although the more you know a person, the more complicated he shows, the sudden addition of a part of his personality and laying a little preludes, it doesn't feel good for the novel. In this work, it is directly imposed on the character's personality change for the plot.

The protagonist of the 13th Emperor is not suitable for a large number of subordinates. Controlling big scenes is a weakness, and playing to your strengths and avoiding your weaknesses is the king.

It doesn’t matter if you don’t describe your feelings enough, just take it slowly. There are more bumps and bumps on the road to growth to make up for the story.

A very rigorous story was originally a story, but some details were omitted and inconsistent, which affected the impression.

The 13 Emperor's transformation is very similar to J's independence, which is also because people cannot help themselves in the world. For those who need to work hard to support their families, compromise is probably our last persistence.

I hope to see the masterpieces of the 13 Emperors, or to continue the previous work.

reply:

Obviously, you are reading the book seriously, and your opinions are very pertinent, and you do not criticize according to your personal likes and dislikes. Next book, let’s agree... I will write it carefully!

Posted by: It's not that I say I'm humble

It's a bit sudden but it's a complete ending~~

Reply: I gritted my teeth and insisted on writing it down. It hurts tooth.

Posted by: Bu Xinji

In my eyes, Shang Feng is the ultimate boss of this book.

You know the name of this ring is an oriental work!!! Remember the masters of the three undead kings??? The man named Shang Feng. The name of the Eastern culture. Is the idea that Mo Yue appears when refining the protagonist? Is it that Shang Feng? Is the Qiankun ring also belonging to Shang Feng. The protagonist's luck is not only the goddess's luck, but also the powerful power of the great god Shang Feng slowly enhances the protagonist's luck... And the protagonist's thunder and lightning magic book may also be the work of Shang Feng, the protagonist is the descendant of Shang Feng!!! The protagonist is Shang Feng who stayed in this crystal wall system as the leader of the imperial dot in this era!!! Haha... the final boss!!!

Reply: It's not a spoof, but Shang Lan is indeed extremely powerful. It cannot appear in this book, otherwise you can only change the protagonist. Before ancient times, there were not many mages who could use thunder and lightning magic. Obviously, Shang Lan is the most powerful among them, and may not even be dead.

If you like Shang Lan, who will write a biography?

Posted by: Fat man flies

Wow, is it the end? Flowers, applause, whistle~~

Reply: This is too soy sauce, okay, make up for iron!

Posted by: Advice

There are two or three chapters to compare...

This final chapter is a bit like the end of the book. It doesn't match the delicateness of the whole book. However, the blue badge is a very good book.

Reply: Because if you add some details, it feels too miserable. I would rather write some free supplements to the intermediate process.

Posted by:yyily

That's it? There are too many things that have not been explained, right?

Reply: Yes, but the novel is always like this. The main line is gone and there is no way to change the spending line to the map. If I write it all out, I will go beyond starting from scratch.

Start from scratch and never end. Thirty or 50 million words can always be written.

Posted by: The Lonely Bird

Damn, that's it,

Not enough fun

Is there any pit left?

I feel like I can write a lot

Shang Lan didn't explain clearly

Reply: How can I bear to let Shang Lan take away Salin's protagonist position. The reason for the ending is all above, little bird, this is life.
Chapter completed!