General:

Hello! I am very happy to be named a enthusiastic book friend. As for the reward, I honestly never thought that I only hope that Brother General’s book will be published in China as soon as possible. I like the book "The Book of Immortals and Buddhas".

I have written a lot of book reviews in my daily life, but that is quite fragmentary. Today I want to make a systematic summary of these, and at the same time write down some of my own opinions. Please correct me if there are any inappropriate points.

This is actually a show of success!

Where can I start? Let’s start with the wonderful aspects of this book (and some aspects that I personally think are more successful).

I have always believed that the most important thing in writing novels is imagination, and the other is writing style. Imagination is god or bone, and writing style is blood or flesh. Only imagination can be fascinating at the beginning, but the more you go, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you

Tasteless. Only writing style, no imagination. Although it can make people appreciate it, it lacks a thread. When you look at a certain chapter, people may feel it is good, but from the overall perspective, you will find it scattered. Nobel Prize

The winner of the scholarship award, Hemingway, once said to his children: Once you have imagination, you will have it for the rest of your life, and it will never leave you again. If you have rich imagination, you are God.

Give you the best talent for writing. The Nine Heavens, Brahma, and the Six Realms of Brahma constructed by the Book of Immortal and Buddha are a brand new mythological system, under which there will be endless imaginations

Space gives the author endless inspiration. And each race also writes its own characteristics, just like the demons written by the General, the demons have roots, the immortals have fairy light, the Buddha’s craftsmanship, the darkness of life and death, the demons refine the evil spirit,

Human nature is the mortal. Moreover, the Immortal and Buddha Records do not follow the traditional cultivation or fairy tale novels. Demons must be extremely evil, and immortals and Buddhas must save all living beings and be compassionate. It is not like some novels nowadays that are the opposite.

In this way, Xing Tian, ​​Chi You and others are the protagonists, writing about the demon gods, and using negative characters as positive characters, thus attracting readers. Therefore, from this perspective, the deeper level of the Immortal and Buddha Record is writing about human nature.

, Immortal, Buddha, Demon, Demon, and Nether are no longer the traditional sense of immortals, Buddhas and demons, but have given more human nature, the innate beauty and ugliness of human nature, and the power and status of human nature

I am very happy to be named a enthusiastic book friend. As for the reward, I honestly never thought that I only hope that the general's book will be published in China as soon as possible. I like the book "The Immortal and Buddha Records" very much.

I have written a lot of book reviews in my daily life, but that is quite fragmentary. Today I want to make a systematic summary of these, and at the same time write down some of my own opinions. Please correct me if there are any inappropriate points.

This is actually a show of success!

General:

Hello! I am very happy to be named a enthusiastic book friend. As for the reward, I honestly never thought that I only hope that Brother General’s book will be published in China as soon as possible. I like the book "The Book of Immortals and Buddhas".

I have written a lot of book reviews in my daily life, but that is quite fragmentary. Today I want to make a systematic summary of these, and at the same time write down some of my own opinions. Please correct me if there are any inappropriate points.

This is actually a show of success!

Where can I start? Let’s start with the wonderful aspects of this book (and some aspects that I personally think are more successful).

I have always believed that the most important thing in writing novels is imagination, and the other is writing style. Imagination is god or bone, and writing style is blood or flesh. Only imagination can be fascinating at the beginning, but the more you go, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you will be, the more you

Tasteless. Only writing style, no imagination. Although it can make people appreciate it, it lacks a thread. When you look at a certain chapter, people may feel it is good, but from the overall perspective, you will find it scattered. Nobel Prize

The winner of the scholarship award, Hemingway, once said to his children: Once you have imagination, you will have it for the rest of your life, and it will never leave you again. If you have rich imagination, you are God.

Give you the best talent for writing. The Nine Heavens, Brahma, and the Six Realms of Brahma constructed by the Book of Immortal and Buddha are a brand new mythological system, under which there will be endless imaginations

Space gives the author endless inspiration. And each race also writes its own characteristics, just like the demons written by the General, the demons have roots, the immortals have fairy light, the Buddha’s craftsmanship, the darkness of life and death, the demons refine the evil spirit,

Human nature is the mortal. Moreover, the Immortal and Buddha Records do not follow the traditional cultivation or fairy tale novels. Demons must be extremely evil, and immortals and Buddhas must save all living beings and be compassionate. It is not like some novels nowadays that are the opposite.

In this way, Xing Tian, ​​Chi You and others are the protagonists, writing about the demon gods, and using negative characters as positive characters, thus attracting readers. Therefore, from this perspective, the deeper level of the Immortal and Buddha Record is writing about human nature.

, Immortal, Buddha, Demon, Demon, and Nether are no longer the traditional sense of immortals, Buddhas and demons, but have given more human nature, the innate beauty and ugliness of human nature, and the power and status of human nature

Can desire be said to be unable to escape the appearance of the six realms? Therefore, when reading the works, sometimes you will be immersed in the description and imagination of the nine heavens, Brahma, and sentient beings in the six realms, and sometimes you will also make people think about philosophical propositions such as the theory of good and evil in human nature.

From the overall structure, the Immortal and Buddha Records are also relatively successful. The so-called "no coincidence can be made without a book", "A book is like looking at a mountain but not loving flatness", the plot must be ups and downs, and the mountains can only attract readers.

Read Jin Yong's novels, the protagonist always survives in desperate situations and gets blessings in danger. In the Immortal and Buddha Record, Yang Tianxing's plots such as the tribulation and resurrection are very conceived. Look at the chapter on tribulation, because of serious injuries, the demonic energy, and the demon

Qi and Ming Qi fought in Yang Tianxing's body, which caused a sudden change in the true essence, which caused a heavenly tribulation. It was seriously injured and survived the tribulation, but it was a blessing in disguise and became a monster that took all the six realms. This also cultivated the five major things for him.

The Divine Art lays the foreshadowing. For example, in the Resurrection section, Yang Tianxing never knew how to unseal the Holy Sword, which was anxious. The battle with Wei Qing made people sweat. He didn't know how the situation continued, but he was also

The seal of the holy sword was unexpectedly unbuttoned, and from then on, he had the best teacher in his practice. It is true that "the mountains are heavy and the water is full of no way, and the willows are dark and the flowers are bright again."

What I appreciate most in terms of writing is the description of characters and war scenes. When you see the description of characters' appearances, they are always innovative and have no similar writing styles. Han Yixiao's several times of making excitement are always so well written.

Momentum, "Gather strength and wisdom in one, combine talent and strategy in one, and combine pride and handsomeness in one word, good. Then there is the psychological changes of the characters and the setting of the environment. Look at the cracks in the chapter,

Yang Tianxing's psychological changes, the contrast between weather changes, and the parallelism of wind, rain, thunder and lightning are all very well written. I think the General's description of heroes and war scenes are well understood.

I won’t talk about it. You can take a look at the peak showdown and large-scale decisive battles of the characters in the book by yourself. It seems that the General is more suitable for the themes of deciding war and heroes. There are also the funny people in the book

The interweaving of objects and plots is undeniable, and this is also an important aspect that attracts readers. You see, there are many such successful models in Jin Yong's novels, and everyone will not be impressed by Zhou Botong in the The Legend of the Condor Heroes trilogy.

Let's see. There are many among the immortals and Buddhas, such as the description of Buhada when he appeared, which is a bit ridiculous in horror. Lao Bu played the role of jokes in many places in the book. It was a fierce battle.

In the battle scene, the author also added a relaxing "seasoning". Look at the dialogue between the demon soldiers and the true king of Beidou, and the description of the fight is irritating.

No work will be perfect, and no matter how beautiful the jade is, there may be flaws. Please refer to the following articles, please discuss with me.

First, the description at the beginning, I always feel that it is a bit too dull. I was deeply fascinated by the Immortal and Buddha Records when I saw the subsequent plot. Can I start with more descriptions of the environment of Wushan and the ancient road of Chang'an (God

The description of the first paragraph of the Condor Heroes is very poetic and picturesque) This is also my suggestion for the whole book. There are many places to describe scenery and scenes, and there are many wonderful sentences, but I always feel that there are fewer sentences.

Is it better to have more famous quotes from ancient people chanting the scenery? You can often feel this when you read Liang Yusheng's works. If it was created by Brother General, it would be better.

Second, when it comes to using language, use less online languages, such as "I fall, I'm dizzy", etc. Although it is popular on the Internet, I think this statement will not appear in classic works that are widely circulated.

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Third, whether the rigor of the plot is considered. For example: The Dragon Tribulation was about Yang Tianxing and met Tian Ge Ji more than ten years ago, and 30,000 years ago, the God of Light had already fought with the Black Demon God and fought each other.

Sleeping in the illusion created by the other party, that is, when the dragon tribulation passed, the God of Light had already been trapped in the illusion of the Black Demon God. Even if the dragon could find the God of Light in the illusion and become the mount of the God of Light,

When Yang Tianxing fought with the demon dragon, he broke through the illusion and came to solve the danger. Why couldn't the God of Light find a way out? Moreover, when the demon dragon fantasized himself, it mentioned that it protested against the dragon to do light without its consent.

Ming Shen's mount, at that time, the black dragon should have not been untied and is still in a magical state, or is trapped in the dark red swamp. How did the black dragon protest to the divine dragon? However, in this case,

It is a master sometimes. Huang Rong once sang two sings of the Yuan Dynasty in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, but it was still in the Song Dynasty. How could Huang Rong sing the Yuan Dynasty? I hope that the General can compete in future chapters.

Good explanations, such as the illusion has special features, it only targets specific people but has no impact on others, the dragon clan has a unique way of communication, etc., or publish an external message to repair it.

The last one? Brother General, don’t take it seriously. I’ll just talk about it here. The title of the book is "The Record of Immortals and Buddhas". Is it more appropriate to "The Record of the Storms and Clouds of the Six Realms" or "The Legend of Light and Darkness"? Of course, the book is not over yet,

I haven't read the content of the whole book, but I may be saying this to be a joke.

Luo Luo said so much. It may be a bit too high to ask the general brothers with the level of masters such as Jin Yong and Liang Yusheng. After all, "high eyesight is low" is a common problem for most readers like me, but it is true.

It is said that "the deep love is the utmost responsibility". We really hope that the "Immortal and Buddha Record" can become the best among the finest products.

I wish the book "The Record of Immortals and Buddhas" will be better and better, the click rate will be higher and higher, and the recommendation votes will be more and more!!! I wish you a happy work and study and all the best. I won’t say the rewards, if you have time, I will be fine

Just add more semen, haha!!

If the General wants to pass this review to the starting point, you can modify it as you wish. Thank you!!!

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