Supplement to the conclusion
I finished writing yesterday, basically decided at noon, and at night, and then wrote the conclusion in one go, and my emotions fluctuated, so many of them were not explained clearly. Some of the content was said in the comments and replies. Considering that many book friends would not see it, I would rather make a correction again.
The book "Lowkey" was written in early 2016. It was not signed by 600,000 words, so it wrote "Star Summoner". When it was rewritten last year, it still inherited the original setting, mainly the ending part. If you write it carefully, you may continue to make adjustments, maybe not, but you can't hold on anymore. If you want to give an ending and give a Tang Yanqi explanation, you have to show the ending of the original story with a dream.
The dream I wrote is the future, but I can understand it no matter how I understand it. Because I didn’t write it, I don’t know if it will be adjusted.
When I was writing this book in 2016, I just graduated and felt very happy about the impact of the environment on a person. Therefore, when I was conceiving this book, I wanted to write about the possible changes that an ordinary person has obtained a plug-in. When I entered the entertainment industry, I also wanted to further emphasize the environment. The setting of the Zhangyang is an ordinary person, both good and bad, with a yearning for a good and good relationship, and also has bad thoughts, such as if I have money, I want to be a scumbag.
In reality, for rich men, if they just want to have skin, women are very cheap (there may be problems with the statement here, I do not discriminate against women, I just state the reality of this for some people) - In order to emphasize this contrast, I set my ideal type, Lin Yiran is as perfect as possible, and Zhang Yang is naturally partially substituted into his own emotions - writing about their love and love, and Zhang Yang is gradually corroded by the environment.
During the conception process, Zhang Yang's behavior and moral code were adjusted step by step for his own psychological feelings (at this time I didn't think I had readers). Part of it was because he read some books and corrected the concept of being impacted after leaving campus. However, Zhang Yang and Lin still had an excessive breakup, which is certain.
At this time, I firmly believe that love has a shelf life, and it will deteriorate. Even the perfect lover, when he gets used to it, he will not feel that she is perfect and starts to seek freshness. To a certain extent, this is not something you can control - people's will is much weaker than imagined, so we admire people with firm will, and more often, there are many reality that will cannot change.
For example... I have been in love for many years, and at a certain moment, you find that love is gone, what can I do at this time? You feel guilty and blame yourself for trying to make yourself love her, but you just don’t love her anymore, and your subjective will cannot change this fact.
Of course, in reality we can keep our feelings fresh, but in the novel, or in the original conception of this novel, we should not express this aspect, but the changes in the environment to people, and the feelings will become. This is what this novel wants to write.
Of course, I still believe that it is better than looking forward to love. I don’t seek to write such stories in the novel, nor can I write them. Therefore, I only write about breaking up and giving Lin Yiran a "perfectionism" caused by a good life and smooth flow. She does not allow any flaws in love, so she noticed that Zhang Yang had emotional distractions with others, and this love deteriorated in her cognition. Even if Zhang Yang still loves her, even if she loves Zhang Yang, she believes that Zhang Yang will not do anything that is sorry to her, will always be nice to her, and she doesn’t want this love anymore.
Many years later, she would make a compromise, know that life is not perfect, she would strive to pursue the remaining happiness, and choose to get back together after Zhang Yang broke up with Tang Yanqi... I don't know if this change is a reality or a defilement, but this was the story conceived at the beginning.
As for how Tang Yanqi has a daughter, how to achieve the fortune-telling "one son and one daughter" for fortune-telling, I am not going to write it out clearly, but writing about some of Zhang Yang's practices in his career has shown his performance in the environment.
As for Fang Shang, the original intention was to further express the corruption of ostentatiousness, but he finally chose to give up.
According to everyone's criticism, this kind of idea is literary youth. After it was released, I realized that according to the original outline, the story would definitely collapse in the later stage, but I didn't decide to change it in the end. Later, I hesitated to change it, but... I didn't hold on until then.
No matter what, this is my last novel with a tendency toward self-color. Next, I will carefully study the commercial writing of online novels. Maybe I can learn well, maybe I can't learn well, but the direction is determined. In the future, I will write cool articles carefully and make everyone happy to read, and I will also be happy - novels that can make money.
Chapter completed!