[005] There is a beautiful granddaughter
After signing the unhumiliation treaty again, Zhang Yang found in despair that the tranquility he wanted did not come. Instead, in order to get a stable sleep without taking off his pants, he had to listen carefully.
After finally finishing the remaining teaching time, Zhang Yang continued to discuss the matter with her: "Is it difficult to reach the boundary of which work triggers?"
"It's not difficult, but the first time is equivalent to an assessment, and the triggering conditions will be very harsh. With your current living conditions, it is almost impossible to achieve without major changes."
"Well……"
"But you have a shortcut."
"What?"
"Doing in love. At your age and life, love is the easiest way to make your emotions and mood reach the trigger limit. Even if you can't do it when you are in love, you will definitely be able to break up. Of course, the premise is that you have to really like that girl."
"Can't you be a boy?"
"As long as the trigger limit can be reached, I have no objection."
“…”
Luo Shen continued to add: "And the ununderstood, repressed feelings are often stronger, or they may be able to reach the trigger limit earlier."
“…”
"I suggest you start with Lin Yiran. Of course, first of all, you have to find yourself back, otherwise your feelings for her will be suppressed by Su Hui's memory. Even if you are together and then dumped, it will be difficult to reach the trigger limit."
Although it is now dominated by Su Hui's memory personality, Zhang Yang still felt nervous when he heard this name, and paused, feeling that something was wrong.
"Wait, why did I get dumped by her?"
"You can throw her away."
“We can’t be together all the time?”
"The painful emotions are stronger, and being together all the time is contrary to your great ideal of being a scumbag?"
Zhang Yang stopped pestering this matter and asked, "You should have novels, right?"
“According to the rules, I cannot provide you with any writing.”
"You all say that the first time the trigger limit is very harsh, I can't sit still, right?"
Zhang Yang is a good student, but he still has a certain understanding of the popular literature of China in this world, because his grandfather is a martial arts novel writer.
Throughout history, the development of civilization is actually a process of popularizing words from top to bottom. Chu Ci, Han Fu to Tang poetry, Song Ci, Ming and Qing novels to online literature... gradually entered the lower class people, and their writing is no longer high above. From the halls and pavilions, to the streets, street stalls, and table bases...
However, due to the historical change, although the macro process is consistent, there are still differences in specific aspects.
An important reason for the emergence of new martial arts novels in the past life is the patriotism triggered by the century-long turmoil. Even so, it did not appear until the 1950s. Then, after Jin Yong's eight characters "for the country and the people, the greatest hero", he completely broke away from the shackles of the previous "gang fighting and revenge killings in the world".
In this world, martial arts did not develop until the early 1980s due to the suppression of policies and traditional serious literature. Although it prospered rapidly with its vast market, it was still a distance away from breaking away from the shackles of tradition.
To learn and flirt with girls, two years is definitely not long. Who knows when they can pass the assessment? Zhang Yang is unwilling to sit still and wait for death. No matter whether martial arts can attract fans or not, he has to try it.
He quickly finalized the first novel he wanted to "write": "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".
So many time travelers copied it for the first time, which is well-founded: If the best martial arts book written by Mr. Jin is probably not the "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", but if you talk about the most knowledgeable people and the most widely spread, there is basically no one who can compete for it.
Moreover, this is a work of Mr. Jin in his early years. In terms of writing techniques, style and plot, it is also suitable as a work of "revolution and innovation".
But the problem is that although Zhang Yang has read the original work several times, he asked him to write it out...
The use of words and sentences in martial arts novels is not obscure. Zhang Yang's literary literacy is barely passing. He could barely make a piece of text according to the standards of martial arts recruitment. But after all, he is not the original author. He does not have the background of Mr. Jin, and he has not memorized the entire article of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" for a whole million words. Who would memorize it?
Unless you have chewed and digested the entire novel's skeleton and turned into your own things, you may become a four-dimensional character by force. Especially if Zhang Yang does remember some of the original text, it is better not to remember it.
If he wrote "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", he would be unable to compete with those old martial arts novels that were clearly behind, and then inspire others and become stepping stones... Zhang Yang would probably be angry and vomited blood. He would not naively believe that after the Legend of the Condor Heroes came out, other knight writers would not follow him.
Since ancient times, the most talented person is scholars, and the least moral character is scholars. Can scholars be called copying?
That's called reference and absorption!
Luo Shen was unwilling to help, so Zhang Yang had to rely on himself, took out a pen and notebook, and began to sort out the outline and timeline of The Legend of the Condor Heroes.
"The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has serialized, three-pair and new versions. There are too many errors and omissions in the serialized version. Zhang Yang has never read it, so he gave up directly. He plans to use the new version as the basis and retain some unreasonable but very pleasant parts of the three-pair version.
Many changes in the new version are for rationality, such as the "Nine Yin Sutra" of the Black Wind Double Evil. The triple version is engraved on Chen Xuanfeng's chest. Later, someone said that he could not write so many words in such a little place. The old man had to change this paragraph, which affected his whole body. Even the matter between Huang Yaoshi and the old naughty boy had to be changed... When Zhang Yang looked at the new version later, he looked at the wrong part.
There are also Chen Xuanfeng and Mei Chaofeng, who were originally called "the thief-woman" and changed it to "good senior brother and junior sister"... and they don't practice the Chongling sword technique, why are they so tired? How could the "thief-woman" shouting "the thief-woman" feel aroused?
And in this plot of Damo, the subtle changes about the fifth master Zhang Asheng are excellent:
Han Xiaoying said to Zhang Asheng's words, "I always like you in my heart", so that people no longer need to worry about whether she said that because Zhang Asheng is about to die. Maybe she has no love in her heart;
Zhang Asheng said to Guo Jing's last words, "You have to be a human being in your life, and you must... be chivalrous first..."
These are all changes that Zhang Yang likes very much, so remember them very clearly.
In addition, there is a setting for "Eighteen Palms of Dragon Subduing". The three-pair version was created by Hong Qigong, and the new version was inherited by the ancestral version. It was originally the Twenty-Eight Palms, but was later simplified by Xiao Feng and Xu Zhu to make it for the Eighteen Palms.
Zhang Yang didn't like both versions. He wanted the beginning of the Tianlong to be the Eighteen Palms, but if it was always the Eighteen Palms, then there was no need to mention Xiao Feng in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". How can the readers be shocked by their foresight of the grass snake and the gray line of the grass and snake, and the long-term conspiracy of the veins that are hidden thousands of miles away?
After thinking for a long time, Zhang Yang finally came to a conclusion: Nothing is easy to show off!
The Legend of the Condor Heroes trilogy has a huge time span, and the relationship between characters is also complicated, which involves some real history. Zhang Yang's outlines becomes more and more messy, and his mind becomes bigger.
When it was a mess, the girl's crisp and sweet voice suddenly sounded in her mind, and she said with some stiffness and rigidity: "The Qiantang River is vast and flowing around Niujia Village, Lin'an Prefecture, Liangzhe West Road, endlessly day and night, flowing east into the sea. There are dozens of cypress trees on the riverside..."
Zhang Yang was stunned and was very happy. He quickly turned to the last page of the notebook, picked up the pen and wrote it. He ignored the sloppy handwriting and dictated three pages. His wrist was so tired that he stopped.
He stopped Luo Shen but kept reciting, and Zhang Yang hurriedly said, "Wait, wait, I have to take a break."
"What does it have to do with you when you read my own?" Luo Shen retorted him, but he still stopped.
Zhang Yang said: "How about you compare the newly revised version and the triple version, and then read it after sorting it out...read it yourself?"
“I only know how to read.”
Zhang Yang was powerless to complain and continued to write quickly.
He dictated three pages, but the plot progressed very slowly. Not to mention Qiu Chuji, even Qu Lingfeng did not start to show off his power. When he thought about the whole book, Zhang Yang suddenly felt the darkness of his life, and he missed the computer that had accompanied him for countless days and nights.
Although it was 1991, even smartphones appeared, and the living standards of Chinese residents are also very good today. According to a report I don’t know when I saw it, the per capita disposable income of residents across the country seemed to be just over 20,000.
According to the memory of the previous life, this is probably equivalent to the income level in the previous life around 2015, but the prices are much lower! For example, fresh milk costs seven or eight yuan per liter, and a pound of pork belly is only ten yuan, and eleven yuan. My mother always bargains every time!
Zhang Yang’s parents are both junior high school teachers and do not have senior professional titles, but on average, each person earns 30,000 or 40,000 yuan a year. Although life is not good, it is much better than Zhang Yang’s age in his previous life.
Home computers have become popular at this time, but Zhang Yang’s parents don’t know how to use them, and they are all teachers, so they naturally resist computers and naturally won’t buy them.
Buying a computer must be put on the agenda!
The girl next door accompanied the girl peeled the apple and handed it to the scum. When she came back from throwing the peel, she looked at the notebook Zhang Yang had been writing curiously, and couldn't help asking, "Are you doing your homework?"
After so many days, Zhang Yang has a good impression of her. He can tell at least that it is not homework, so he will not lie and respond vaguely: "Write something."
The girl didn't ask much, but soon, the old man from bed 39 came back with his wife helping him to the bathroom, and stopped in front of Zhang Yang's bed, like the old principal who came to inspect the elementary school classroom. He looked at it for a while.
The old man loves face and has quarrel with Zhang Yang before. He is curious and insists on not asking.
But for the next two days, Zhang Yang was always like this. The old man was bored in the ward and finally couldn't help it. When he passed by again, he stopped and asked, "What are you writing about?"
"novel."
Zhang Yang looked up at the old man, and out of politeness, he responded, and then continued to lower his head and write quickly.
"I haven't graduated from high school yet, what novels do I write?"
Zhang Yang ignored him.
"I'm not old and am not young."
When the old man saw that he ignored him, he left muttered, but when Zhang Yang was having some drip in the afternoon, he couldn't help but shouted to him: "Hey, hey, that student... how much did you write your novel? Show me?"
Zhang Yang originally wanted to refuse, but then he thought about it and it didn't have any impact. Moreover, the old man seemed to have a certain identity. It was not a bad thing to have a good relationship. Maybe he had a beautiful granddaughter?
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Chapter completed!