"I've finished reading." Su Xing nodded.

"You finished reading it so quickly?" Guo Pan didn't expect it. "It took me several months to write these things, and you finished reading them all in just one class?"

"To be precise, I only spent half a class." Su Xing said, "It took you several months to write tens of thousands of words. The speed is too slow, and the things you wrote are not good."

"Why can't it work?" After being denied, Guo Pan was very shocked. "I wrote it very seriously and thought about every plot for a long time."

"No matter how carefully you write and how long you think about it, what's the use if the plot is not attractive?" Su Xing said, "There are several problems with what you wrote. Do you want me to mention them to you?"

"Tell me." Guo Pan also wanted to know.

"The first one is that the sentences are not clear enough and there are too many bells and whistles. The purpose of a story is to explain one thing clearly in the most simple and smooth language. Your sentences are too complicated." Su Xing said, "For example, you have a paragraph at the beginning,

The morning sun burns with the morning mist, a golden light. In the forest, there are many

The moist bare branches and dark green leaves of frost-resistant pine trees, cypresses, and hollies shine with spring-like life. Once exposed to the sunshine, the morning mist descends and penetrates into the soil, causing bursts of moisture to appear everywhere.

Angry." "What's wrong with this passage? I think it's very good." Guo Pan said.

"There is a big problem. You can describe it clearly in just a few words in this paragraph. You have to use so many sentences, and these sentences don't read smoothly." Su Xing said, "All descriptions use the words "rising sun".

That’s it.”

"This description is too simple, it seems a bit superficial." Guo Pan expressed his thoughts, "This sentence was not written by me. I copied it from a book. An author who can publish books has great skills.

It shouldn’t be low.”

"Those are traditional writers. They are indeed very capable, but novels will eventually belong to the Internet. Again, just use the simplest language to tell the story clearly and smoothly. There is no need for complicated rhetoric, which will make this article far away from the Internet.

The reader is too far away, which makes people feel unreal." Su Xing said, "One more thing, have you read The Deer and the Cauldron, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, and The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Sword?"

"I've read them all, and more than once. I've read The Deer and the Cauldron four times, I've read The Legend of the Condor Heroes three times, and I've read The Heaven and the Dragon Sword several times." Guo Pan nodded, "Including some other novels, I've read them basically.

I’ve seen it all, otherwise you think why would I watch Dream of Red Mansions when school starts? I’m forced to watch it, there’s nothing I can do about it.”

"You can't read Dream of Red Mansions, but some people can read Dream of Red Mansions five or six times, and even study Dream of Red Mansions specifically." Su Xing said, "The principle is the same. The vocabulary of these things written must be simple. After reading so many novels,

Have you concluded anything?"

"Wonderful, so wonderful. How great would it be if I could have that kind of martial arts? How great would it be to meet girls like Zhao Min and Shuang'er." Guo Pan said with admiration, "Sometimes in my dreams, I dream of myself flying across the grass.

, there’s nothing wrong with jumping off the stairs, but it’s a pity that it’s gone when you wake up from the dream.”

"Is this what you have concluded?" Su Xing asked, "Wonderful, too wonderful?"

"Yes, aren't these novels wonderful?" Guo Pan nodded.

"It's wonderful, but you didn't sum it up properly." Su Xing said directly without guiding step by step, "The most important thing in a novel is to make people feel comfortable. What does it mean to feel comfortable? There are adventures and falling into a place.

In a cave, you pick up martial arts secrets, or you meet an expert who teaches you martial arts, or you meet a woman and have an entanglement with her, or you are reborn and know some information that others don't know, and use it to make money and pick up girls.

These can make people feel comfortable.”

"In The Deer and the Cauldron, Wei Xiaobao entered the palace and roamed the harem as a fake eunuch. He met his master and taught him martial arts. These were cool points. Zhang Wuji fell off a cliff and went into a cave to pick up martial arts secrets. This was also cool. Yang Guo's Journey into Ancient Times

It’s also fun to meet the little dragon girl in the tomb and practice dual cultivation with the little dragon girl.”

"Of course, there are all kinds of emotional entanglements here. If you have a man, you must have a woman, otherwise all that's left is passion. If the passion lasts for a long time, it will turn into homosexuality and make people unappetizing. The novel you wrote is mainly about

Show it to men, what men long for is nothing more than money, power, and women, and women are indispensable."

"Look at what you wrote, it's too straightforward. Women do have one, but they don't have any characteristics. They don't have a clear personality. They are either savage, gentle, or cold, but they have to be the same." Su Xing said.

Guo Pan looked at Su Xing dejectedly: "Listening to what you said, I feel that I am not suitable for writing novels."

"Take your time, I told you, this is a process of slowly accumulating and progressing." Su Xing said, "I will provide you with an idea, you can write it down and see."

"Do you have any ideas?" Guo Pan looked at Su Xing.

"Yes." Su Xing nodded, "Combine traditional martial arts with myths and legends to write an oriental fairy tale."

"Similar to Legend of Shushan Swordsman?" Guo Pan has indeed read a lot of novels.

"Yes, it's similar to this." Su Xing nodded, "Let me give you a general idea. There was an ordinary young man at the foot of a certain sect. One day, he met an eminent monk. The eminent monk taught the young man the secret method, but something unexpected happened later.

This young man was accepted into the sect, but his qualifications are relatively dull and his martial arts practice is slow, so others look down on him."

"Later, there was a coincidence. The young man obtained a magic weapon, and his cultivation level continued to improve, but no one else knew about it. Later, in a competition in the sect, the unfavorable young man relied on his hidden strength and hands.

The magic treasure collection won a good ranking and won the

In the process, he met a charming girl from the sect. Then came the invasion of the demon sect. The boy and the girl never left each other in critical moments and had mutual affection. Later, the boy met an accident again and fell into a dangerous place. They met in a dangerous situation.

He killed a girl from a demon sect, and the two got into trouble again."

"That's pretty much it. There are feelings, there are adventures, there are also things like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger." Su Xing said.

Guo Pan looked at Su Xing with admiration: "You are really awesome. Just hearing what you said made me want to read it. Have you also written novels? The idea you provided me could not have been written by you.

Bar?"

"Writing novels is very hard." Su Xing returned the notebook in his hand to Guo Pan, "You spent several months writing so much content, but I finished it in half a class. I even gave you a negative review. You feel guilty

What do you think?"

"It's very sad," Guo Pan said. "I feel like I'm useless and I didn't write the story well."

"Look, writing a novel is a very difficult road. You have to think about the plot and code words twelve, thirty, four hours a day." Su Xing said, "There are not many interpersonal relationships, and you may not even be able to find a girlfriend. Toilet paper
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