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If there is no accident, this book should not be available this month. I would like to support a few more rounds of recommendations to see if I can survive to Sanjiang.

Then let’s talk about some plots of the book:

You can also see that before changing hearts, Geno had always participated in the plot as a bystander, and after changing hearts, he frequently came into contact with the plot.

This makes the early stage look a little dull and relaxed, making the beginning of this book not very eye-catching.

Then there is the timeline issue. In fact, many of Zuan’s heroes mentioned “accidents”, they created an accident or the accident affected their lives.

According to the author's observations many times, these accidents are not all about the same accident. This book deals with them all into the same poison gas leakage accident in order to facilitate the introduction of all heroes, aggravate the conflict, and make the plot more brain-burning.

(You can recall that all the heroes of the Twin Cities have appeared)

In addition, Britz and Victor have actually parted ways long ago, and the fine-tuning of the timeline is also to show Victor's only remaining humanity through the emotional line.

Apart from the timeline changes and the fine adjustment of the original plot, the author Jun has not moved anything anymore. He has carefully studied the character and scene settings, which are very sophisticated.

The plot of the three-cannon invasion of the later Tsar Return was also rigorously deduced. The plot is safe, and it is reasonable and opens up the brain.

Then there are some fun and poisonous points. Until now, no one has mentioned poisonous points, which is enough to make me very proud (except for the heroine problem).

There seems to be not many exciting things, so it is not advisable to let the heroes succeed to this book. Even if the heroes are just supporting roles, the author will not help but portray their image well.

Urgot is the first bento hero, and he doesn't seem to die heroically enough? I wonder if his death can touch everyone's heartstrings.

Mondo's experience is the second tragedy after Victor and Jace. As expected, the author's skills in tearjer are not very good enough... He couldn't write about crying, but he was still very satisfied with the ending arranged for it.

That's all I have to say.

Finally said:

The male protagonist is not a scumbag!

The male protagonist is not a scumbag!

The male protagonist is not a scumbag!

It’s my idea to change the map and change the heroine. I’ll blame the author for being a scumbag. The hero is innocent. The author will not write him as a scumbag. Everything is the author’s design! (It’s all my wife, hehehe~)

The male protagonist is not abstinent and will not restrain himself. If he encounters a lustful demon like Evelyn, what should happen will happen...

The previous statement that I didn’t choose a heroine will not affect the plot. I just wanted to provide you with multiple ending options when the book was finished. Just like a text game, just treat the heroine you like as the main ending. (Because I was said to be suspicious of life?!)

If you have anything you want to say, you can put it in the book review and this chapter, and the author will reply when he sees it.
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