[RN Comments on "Colorful Demon Sword" by Yixi Yuqiaohua
An ordinary young man changed his life's destiny because of his laziness. He fought against all the demons in the world, swept away the burning monsters, carried the divine dragon to the heavenly palace, and competed with the Lord God. He leaned on the red and green trees, his love lasted forever, and the beautiful woman fell in love with him.
Favored, a confidant and a beautiful woman will accompany you through life and death... This is a magical world of cultivation, where gods and ghosts are frightened by colorful magic swords, strange magic and secret techniques emerge in an endless stream, and pink beauties can charm the whole city with their smiles...
Enemies are extremely jealous when they meet each other. They either retort or fight with each other. Even if they are enemies, they must never meet each other on weekdays. If they meet, it will be a narrow encounter. However, it is not that enemies do not get together, but my son secretly interacts with his enemies.
They met and fell in love with each other, and even made a private decision for life. Can such a marriage be realized? How should two young people in love face it if they are opposed by their families? Can they bear it psychologically?
This has led to extremes and a dead end? And if the parents of both parties know about this, how will they deal with it? What kind of rough treatment will they adopt? Will it cause death? The elder brother learned a few years earlier than the younger brother.
Martial arts, but the younger brother who practiced martial arts secretly surpassed his elder brother in martial arts and received praise from everyone. Will the elder brother be jealous and jealousy arise spontaneously and expand every moment?
How should he face his younger brother who is stronger than him in every aspect? Can he bear the ridicule in people's words? How should he face it? Should he face it with a gentleman's heart and love him as always, or should he turn from jealousy to hatred?
, and what about killing his younger brother?
Beauties love heroes, and heroes love beauties even more. There are so many beautiful girls who are rescued by him and who fall in love with him. Each one of them is full of love for him, and the autumn seeds are twinkling, which makes people fascinated. What should he do when he is deeply trapped in the peach blossom array?
How to face and choose? How should these girls deal with the competitors who compete with them? Will they overturn the jealousy jar, quarrel with each other so much that they even go to the extent of killing them? Faced with so many charming beauties
, that kind of temptation is very powerful. Does he sit back and be calm, like Wu Erlang, and be a true hero who is not close to women? Or is he like Ximen Qing, who falls in love with everyone he meets, will he be a playboy?
Carrot, the Huahua Taisui who took the beautiful woman into his arms and kicked her away when he got tired of playing with her in every possible way?
Can a person, an ordinary person, cultivate to become a god or an immortal? How can a young boy who is ignorant and pure cultivate to become a person who can fly freely in the sky like a bird? From an ordinary person, he can become a person who has stepped into the fairyland, carefree and free.
An invincible spirit with incomparable magical power, capable of defeating and subduing no matter how superb demons and monsters he encounters? What power will he use to achieve his goals? How will he choose the path to the gods? Can he get what he wants?
Wait, wait. There are so many questions, so many mysteries, so many mysteries for you to solve, placed in front of you, for you to explore, for you to search. And there are so many incredible things among them.
It is also mixed with so many thrilling stories, thousands of twists and turns, twists and turns, heartbreak, flowers falling into the stream, which will make you suddenly suspicious, worried about the people in the book, haunted by dreams, and puzzled by the explanation.
In short, questions come one after another, and suspense emerges in endlessly. If you want to explore the whole story and ending, then calm down and spend three days and three nights, staring red-eyed, holding back your stomach, and carefully or carefully
Read the novel "Seven Colors Demonic Sword" by Yixi Yuqiaohua at a glance. When you count to the last word with bloodshot red eyes, everything suddenly becomes clear and you fall into a deep sleep feeling relieved.
Here I don't want to use the word "martial arts novel" to classify Yixi Yuqiao's "Seven Colorful Magic Sword". Because it seems a bit too simple to simply use the word "martial arts". In my opinion
Now, it seems more appropriate to classify it as "mythological novels" or "fantasy novels". Don't believe it, you may be able to agree with me after reading the novel. I am not talented, but I think that "mythology"
Or "fantasy" novels seem to be more interesting than martial arts (there are too many pure martial arts novels, people's vision seems to be a bit paralyzed, and their interest is greatly reduced), and it will make you dazzled.
, it will also make you enter the realm of fantasy and give full play to your imagination to cooperate with the author's pen, step by step, and finish the novel step by step.
Qin Fengying, the wife of Shao Liuyun, the owner of Luoxia Villa, mistakenly adopted the son of her enemy's demon sect, Tianmodong, and named her Shao Zheng. She explained to herself that this "fight" was a fight for strength, not a fight for strength.
I just hope that I will study hard in the cold window and strive for fame in the future. Poor parents in the world, can Mrs. Qin Fengying's beautiful wishes be fulfilled? What if it cannot be realized?
The most successful aspect of Yixi Yuqiaohua's novel "Seven Colors Magic Sword" is undoubtedly the delicate description. Whether it is the characters, the scenery, or the inner activities of the characters, delicate brushwork is used everywhere to carve out
The fine textures are really placed in front of the readers, making you feel as if you are actually there after reading it, and have the experience of communicating with the characters. It brings the readers closer to the characters, almost like face-to-face communication.
Going deep into the soul of the characters, you can't help but have a personal experience and a desire to communicate with the characters while reading. The writing method of the novel is originally a combination of description and narration. Narration is like a sketch in a painting.
It gives you a general outline of the entire work, but it cannot make the reader resonate with the characters. The description just fills this defect. The delicate description is for the portrayal of the characters, just like a meticulous figure painting
The eyelashes in the middle must be painted carefully, one by one, not only the distance, but also the thickness. Painting to the fine points will give people an elegant feeling, and the characters will have souls, making you feel like they are ready to come out. Only in this way,
Only in this way can the author's finishing touch be brought out, and your finishing touch can be vivid. Otherwise, without the moon set off by clouds, no matter how perfect you draw the moon, it will still make the reader feel empty and colorless. Of course, after that,
Too many or excessive descriptions will make the novel look bloated and boring, giving people a long-winded and boring feeling. However, Yixi Yuqiaohua's novel "Seven Colorful Magic Sword" shows the author's skill in this aspect, and he uses it just right.
This writing technique of description adds a lot of color to the novel.
Another success of the novel is the grandness of the scenes. Because the novel is a category of ideas (or myths), many scenes will be divorced from reality, far away from the ground, and soar and leap at will in the high air. This requires grand scenes. Although the author
The characters in the book are not described as being able to do somersaults like Sun Monkey, who somersault thousands of miles away, but they are flying around in the sky like White Snake. This is divorced from human instinct and seems to be incompatible with human nature.
The feeling of being on par with the Eight Immortals, so many occasions must show magnificent scenes, so as to match them and be watchable. Not only the scenes are grand, but even the fights are much grander than the scenes in ordinary martial arts novels.
.Pure martial arts fighting is about fighting each other with swords and guns. At most, you can jump higher and farther. You will definitely not fight with monsters in the air like Sun Monkey. But this kind of idea or mythological novel has been broken.
These rules and regulations, without the restrictions of foot binding, make it much easier to write, and you can give full play to the author's imagination. As long as you can imagine it, you can show it here. You don't have to worry about others saying you.
It's nonsense, because readers will understand at a glance: this is a myth (idea), which is sometimes reality, so they avoid it. The novel "Seven Colorful Demon Sword" by Yixi Yuqiaohua uses this aspect very well. This kind of
The spectacular scenes under the rich imagination have been fully developed in the novel, and they are spared no effort to show them again and again. It can be said that they are fully displayed.
The precise choice of words and the right rendering and foreshadowing are another feature of Yixi Yuqiaohua's novel "Seven Colorful Magic Sword". The author not only has a certain writing skills, but also has a certain foundation in controlling words. The novel's
The sentences are fluent, the ink is concentrated, and the grammatical sentences are relatively accurate. There are very few ambiguities, especially the choice of some uncommon words. It is more suitable for the content and environment described in the novel, and there is no jerkiness.
Feeling. It shows that the ability to control words is not shallow.
While reading this novel, there was a lingering shadow that repeatedly appeared in my brain, that is, the writing style of martial arts novels has also changed with the development of the times. From the sword and gun showdown at the beginning,
It develops into a confrontation of skills, and then a confrontation of ideas. These are particularly prominent in film and television dramas. It makes people dazzled and feels that they are not fighting in front of martial arts masters, but a bit like airplanes shooting. In fact, this is not surprising. This kind of
Mythical novels of ideas have already appeared in "The Romance of the Gods". From this, I thought that I had seen an article about martial arts novels in the newspaper, so I couldn't help excerpting it for readers to analyze, maybe to understand this article.
The writing style of the piece can help:
"Martial arts novels will never disappear, they just exist in another form... In the attempt of martial arts to combine romance, history, mythology, and fantasy and monsters, a good model has been created for future generations.
Today's martial arts novelists have contributed to our martial arts world with their rather dexterous knowledge of mathematics, physics, literature, history and philosophy. While they are enriching the current form of martial arts novels, they are also launching new interpretations of the martial arts world.
...Of course, their true identities may also be computer experts, astrophysicists, surgeons, doctors of literature, idol stars suffering from adolescent syndrome, etc.
We cannot but deny that the martial arts world of martial arts novelists is interconnected with today’s social environment. Some martial arts novelists now want to kill someone at every turn, but in fact they may just be doing some artistic practice.”
I think maybe future martial arts novels will develop in this direction. If so, they should no longer be called martial arts novels, but should be called "idea novels" or simply "myth or fantasy novels". I wonder if friends
I agree with my point of view, but this is what I think, please let me know if I am wrong.
Of course, no one is perfect, and no one is perfect. Every work has its shortcomings. Even if you are a literary master, if you deliberately pick the bones, you will find some shortcomings. There are more typos in the text.
I guess this may be because the author did not proofread carefully. But in any case, since it is a completed work and has been presented to the readers, it should be proofread as carefully as possible to avoid typos and omissions as much as possible. In addition,
The conception of the work is still limited by some traditional works. In some places, whether it is the conception of the work, the description of the plot, or the handling of some interpersonal relationships, it gives people a feeling of déjà vu without breaking through the limitations of the predecessors.
, this may be because my requirements are too high.
In short, Yixi Yuqiao's novel "Seven Colors Demonic Sword" is a very good novel and well worth reading. Especially readers who like martial arts novels should read it carefully and don't miss it.
Opportunity. During your reading, in the bloody fighting, you will feel a cool breeze blowing on your face, and you will have a refreshing feeling, which will give your tense nerves a moment of rest.
This will make you more interested in the future plot, the fate of the characters, and the ending of the whole story.
The above is just my humble opinion. There are many masters in the "martial arts", and there are more than tens of millions of people who can beat me. Let me make a big promise here: be patient and look forward to it!
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Chapter completed!