Chapter 61 This kid really has a fate with me!~)
In fact, this night, teachers have seen many novel composition titles.
But it is nothing more than topics like "a secret love in my school days" and "I like you, try to catch up with you".
Although it was a bit fresh, after reading too much, the teachers also felt that it was similar to their usual compositions.
Because the students' thoughts and ideas are not mature enough, they still lack some thinking about this kind of liking.
A female teacher even joked: "How can they know what love is? They just think this girl is beautiful. I like her. This boy is sunny and handsome. I like him."
But the title of this essay, "Like is an equal thing", attracted their attention.
[My brother once told me that when he was in high school, he had a crush on a girl.
One day he woke up from his dream in the middle of the night and dreamed of her.
At that time, he lived in school without a mobile phone, and he was very sad.
After glaring on the bed for a while, he jumped up and draped in his clothes, lying on the balcony, hoping that someone would discover this young man who was sad because of his secret love.
When I arrived at the balcony, I found that it was snowing outside, there was already thick snow on the ground, and the snowflakes in the sky were falling like sifting ash...]
At the beginning, the teachers thought it was just a student narrating with other people's experiences.
But gradually, they found that the theme and central idea of this essay were expressed very clearly.
“This is a good article!”
After reading it, a male teacher seemed to feel touched. He shouted excitedly: "This composition is so well written!"
"Yes, liking is equal. In a relationship, it is a very happy thing for girls to be loved, but sometimes you have to know how to repay and maintain this liking."
"It's not just girls who need rewards, but boys also need rewards. For example, I used to chase a very handsome boy. He kept hanging me and teasing me with my liking for him, so I gave up decisively later."
"Especially this passage: [We are prone to create an illusion of infatuation in a self-abuse way, so that we can stand on the moral high ground of our feelings and gain a deformed sense of satisfaction and security.
In fact, whether it is standing on the balcony on a snowy night or giving her a cup of milk tea in the heavy rain, when I think back, I often feel as strong and intense as Qiao Feng fighting Juxianzhuang and Guan Yu traveling thousands of miles apart.
For the other party, a cup of milk tea is a cup of milk tea, which cannot bear the feelings of landslides you want to hold on it.] These sentences are written so well, I think there is nothing to say."
"I think it's full mark, too."
Just after many teachers gave high-rated scores, one of the teachers questioned: "But do you really think a first-year high school student can write an article with such insights?"
This sentence stopped many teachers.
Yes, how could an uninformed senior high school senior year be able to write such words!
This essay seems to be written by a person who has entered middle age and wasted half of his life.
Soon, the voices of everyone's discussion attracted Teacher Feng Xiang in the next classroom.
Although he is the reviewer of this judge, he believes that all the teachers here have participated in many high school entrance examinations and college entrance examination papers.
So he was also very curious about what kind of articles could make them have such a heated discussion.
"Teacher Feng Xiang, take a look at this composition."
"I think this article is indeed well written, but it does not fit the thinking of being a year old!"
"Can it be cheating?"
"It shouldn't be true. We didn't know the title of this composition until the exam started. Confidential work is free of water."
Feng Xiang walked up to him and carefully read the article on the screen.
Read every word, every sentence, and every paragraph carefully.
He frowned at first, then smiled slowly, and finally thoughtful, and the article was filled with emotions.
When Teacher Feng Xiang saw the sentence "No one can bear the value of another person. Only by being an independent and valuable person can you truly learn to love another person." He couldn't help but cheer up.
He said bluntly: "This essay is so well written! It even wrote down all my little thoughts when I was young."
"I'll ask, does this essay describe your emotional experiences when you were studying or even when you grew up?"
Teacher Feng Xiang’s question has aroused everyone’s thoughts.
"Indeed, when I was in junior high school, I wanted the team leader to pay attention to me. Then I helped her get water every time, but she just ignored me. Later, my grades gradually improved, and she talked to me instead."
"It's not just the study era, but it's the same now. If you don't have the ability and don't become better, how can you love someone better? Only by improving yourself can you make the other party appreciate you more."
An elderly teacher was still skeptical about this composition. He shook his head and said, "I don't really believe that a senior high school student can write such a view of life emotionally."
Teacher Feng Xiang immediately asked other teachers to search online for any relevant text duplicate content.
But soon, the news was that this article had no traces on the Internet.
If you say so, there is no cheating in this essay!
"Anyway, this student did not cheat at the time. It proved that this essay was written by him, so he deserves full marks!"
Another teacher was worried: "However, we are still a composition competition for middle school students, not an adult competition. If this composition is set as the first prize, it is likely to have an impact on social public opinion, so why not put it in the second prize."
"Yes, what if someone outside says that our teacher encourages early love later?"
"But, isn't the title of this composition published by the organizer? Isn't this title just about writing about this kind of likes and views on feelings when I was a student? I don't think there is anything wrong with this composition, so I insist on setting it as the first prize."
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Many teachers express their opinions and stick to their own ideas.
But they all know that the decision should be decided by the reviewer Feng Xiang.
When Teacher Feng Xiang looked at this article, he always felt a sense of familiarity between the lines.
A person has his unique writing style and personality.
The same is true for this essay.
Teacher Feng Xiang asked: "Which student wrote this essay and which school was it?"
A teacher immediately flipped through the name column in front and replied: "Li Hao, Hengjiang No. 1 Middle School."
"Li Hao?" Teacher Feng Xiang suddenly felt that the name was very familiar.
"Check if it's the top scorer in the middle school entrance examination?"
"I checked it, yes, Li Hao, who studied at Hengjiang No. 1 Middle School, was the top scorer in the middle school entrance examination not long ago."
Teacher Feng Xiang suddenly burst into laughter: "This kid is really destined to be with me!"
All the teachers looked at Teacher Feng Xiang with puzzlement, not understanding what he said.
Teacher Feng Xiang explained: "I decided on this kid's high school entrance examination composition. At that time, the teachers were like you, either giving low scores or full scores. At that time, I gave full scores."
Chapter completed!