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Excellent long review appreciation

I don't understand why I can't see this book on the daily and monthly click lists, although this does not prevent the fact that this book is a good book.

If Xiao You see the comments, you should be able to understand how religious I am. I even divided these texts into paragraphs, and each paragraph has two spaces at the beginning.[]

I like your words, such as the words you fill in yourself, which makes me feel that you are very literary. The characters' dialogues are very mature, at least very similar to the dialogues of big names in TV series.

However, I would like to say something other than praise: first, I will talk about the things I read briefly (skip) in this book. First, the description of the scenery at the beginning of each chapter, the history of the characters, or the comments of a phenomenon. Although these things make you look very literary, knowledgeable, and thoughtful. However, they have little to do with the theme and development of the novel. Being a god is a great goal. I always support you!! Some online novels are called fast food novels because they do not have much connotation, literary talent, and some are just The twists and turns of the plot is like telling a story. It is impossible to talk about it. Suddenly, the development history of a supporting role is talked about, and then a long paragraph is made. Then I don’t read the lyrics and the introduction of the real characters in the text, such as Anne Hathaway, the big mouth princess, I also like her. I know what you wrote. I see that it takes up so much space in a chapter and is very resentful. I guess you can understand that when you watch Japanese comics, the war is about to begin, but I whine and talk about the feeling of an episode.

You write these things with ease, and you will write them with great pleasure. I said that these things are filled with words because I want to see more, more and more plot developments in a chapter, which has nothing to do with whether you cheat the words and sell them for money. You have to understand this expectation~

The heroine, oh no, it should be said how many women do you want to have in the hero? Bastard. Yaoyao, Queen, Princess, and Vivi are enough. Why do you want to make Xuanxuan just by making a movie? You can make Bai Xue just by taking a plane? You will make Annie when you go to the United States! Do you want the young master to die on a woman’s belly? Do you have to be happy to become Dumas everywhere? Moreover, Xuanxuan seemed to debut in a movie of A-level, which greatly affected Qibu’s healthy image.

I'm done, come on, Xiaoyou~~~~

You have a good literary talent and funny dialogue. The protagonist is rich in 1 generation and 3 generations. The protagonist is very good, but I feel that he is still a little 2... I don't have the awareness of criticism. Maybe he is too domineering. I read more than 100 chapters in one go, but I feel that he can't stand it anymore after he has more, especially after he is reborn, Li Yatou has too few scenes. You said that the world of seven steps is full of Li Yatou, but there are other sisters there, and they are all gods and horse stars. Okay... The writing is very pure, well, okay...

* Too few, there are many romances. Of course, I know that too much politics is the risk of political review, especially when the situation is not very clear now, it will be updated in the end. Mengdi, if you can guarantee the update, you can make more * God-like things, I feel that the hope of becoming a god is much greater than that now. Even if you are forced to eunuchs in the end, it will be better than how to click the red ticket now. I feel that how to click the red ticket and click it, I feel that your writing style and your level should not be the only way to click it.

Actually, after reading more than ten or twenty chapters, I felt that I was not good at writing it. I thought there were some things, and I couldn’t tell you exactly what it was. I could only understand and not express it. Later, I realized it! So I read it again and realized that the author is God! This novel is not as clear as I used to read novels. This book requires me to study and experience it word by word! Although some plots are painful, such as the protagonists are many women... but it cannot cover the light of this book! God is a person who has experienced it, and a person is the future god. Wang Di, I support you!

Have you ever tried to write between half drunk and half awake, or no matter what logical world situation, just follow your mood, maybe you can try it. Of course, writing this must be a big mistake, but my experience is to write first, go to the ball first, go to bed after writing, and then go to the next day when you wake up. Anyway, that's how I did it. I took half a bottle of Erguotou, and then started spraying on the forum. When I woke up the next day, I was shocked. Some views or sentences were not written when I was awake. I really admired myself, such a great idea

The beginning is good, dying for the most loved ones, and the plot after rebirth is also very pleasant and looks very relaxed...

I originally planned to give you half of the 6 votes that support Mars every day, but inexplicably there were two more women...

I saw that I didn’t find many scenes in Li Wanyao. The plot of recalling a woman who could almost be considered a one-night stand in her previous life is much more than the so-called first heroine!

I read about half of it, and I almost never said anything about Li Wanyao's previous life. Maybe you wanted to write it slowly in the future, but at least you can give her more plots!!

What about Faye Wong, what about the actress queen who died after doing it a few times, and there are so many emotional dramas written, where is your Li Wanyao? Where is the whole world of the protagonist?

Girls can be fucked. You like to buy all the actresses in the entertainment industry and subdue all the women in the world! But those are supporting roles! The heroine, what is the heroine? Since it is the main, it can only be one! The key points of all the key points! The others can only be called supporting roles!

I don’t have any motivation to continue watching it. I feel that the image of Wang Qibu he created before has been completely ruined. I don’t know why he committed suicide and why he was reborn?

What do you know to cherish if you have lost it? If you cherish it, put people at home and go out to soak in other girls by yourself?

Moreover, Wang Fei is very unrestrained. It is hard for me to think that a yanee would need such a woman as the goddess before bed. It's so nonsense!

The author shouldn't put his preferences on the characters he wrote too casually... It's completely inappropriate.

In addition, although the artistic conception of long sentences can be very beautiful, I also like to write long sentences, but people will be very tired when reading them, especially the scene descriptions. I basically jumped to read them... Indeed, I have read them carefully and there will be that kind of beautiful scenery in my mind, but I think online novels are not prose, and not many people will pay attention to this...

That's all I have to say, I don't want to read this book for the time being

The book is very well thanked, and the author has a good writing style. He also has a good grasp of the plot. Although the story lacks big villains and is not ups and downs, it looks very exciting. The most important thing is that there are no endless 2b passerby A to provoke the protagonist. Many urban novels have this problem. Many authors often use 2b passerby A villain to guide the plot when they cannot be written, or use 2b passerby A to directly raise the number of words. Generally, I don’t read such books, regardless of who the author is. The author does not, which makes me feel very happy. Really.

Hello, Da Da Wang, I am a serious bookworm. I have been reading since the first day of the New Year, so I can still see some divine books at a glance. I remember the first time I saw the young master and the ban on my phone. Looking at Da Da Wang’s introduction, I knew this was a good book, but it didn’t disappoint me. The young master was in my opinion, regardless of the content or the writing method and words. The reason why I posted this book review was to say about updates and typos! From the first time you cut the update to now, I have never thought about removing your

Book. I know this book will definitely become a god, but that's why I want to say it. Wang Dada, you have updated it, but I don't know what readers other than me think about those typos. But from my 4 years of bookworm, you are not so rich. I never post book reviews when reading books, but the Young Master is exception. Just because this book is good, I hope you can see and take some practical actions. Don't let the hearts of us readers who have always supported the Young Master. Finally, I wish you better and better writing your book!!!

I feel very sad when I see Wang Di's words. Really! Can I write a book at least? The author writes a novel like writing whatever he wants? Is it still the author's novel? Even if it's a word count, what's wrong? A penny is spent? A good novel is not cursed, but written by the author word by word. The book "Young Master in Military Costume" is one of the best novels I have read in the past eight years. Nothing else is for you to see a good novel! Mr. Wang supports you!

After chasing for a long time, I refreshed the book every day during those days. I was very anxious. I was afraid that Xiao You would castrate himself. After reading it for a long time, I felt relieved. I have been greatly updated these days and it is very comfortable to read it. How can I say it! The young master always has some imagination space for us who read books. It is very novel, and various narrative techniques. The story is like a roller coaster and the heart is surging. It is always a turn of the circle. It is a real masterpiece! Work hard, but you should also pay attention to rest and take care of your health.

After reading the introduction of the work and the main content of the first three chapters, I rarely evoke a feeling of unsatisfactory.

Most online articles are impetuous and tend to stimulate the readers' nerves directly and violently. In such an environment, "The Young Master in Military Costume" has a refreshing feeling, whether it is the title or background introduction of the book. Although it is a mainstream rebirth theme, the statements and preparations of many elements such as information, content, story structure, etc. from the first three chapters of the main text will be the starting point of an incisive article. I believe that after a longer period of creation and more accumulation of storylines, this novel will become more and more full, and will be presented to readers in a gorgeous and exquisite manner. I am very optimistic about Wang Di's work, and after reading it, I feel that I have to pay attention and support! Support Wang Di and support "The Young Master in Military Costume"! Give you more attention and expectations!

The latest update is a bit unsatisfactory. Of course, this person is alive and has troubles with this and that. As long as you are a living person, you must update it. (Don't compare with Fenghuo, the gene mutation of that Martian people). Of course, I have always been optimistic about you. Becoming a god is your wish. I am one of your supporters anyway, but it is really hurtful to have a character. If you don't say anything else, even if you say that the cold currents come today and the whole city will be out of power, that's also a reason. At least on this day, your loyal readers will not wait for the update stupidly... After giving too much such stupidity, you can imagine that not any manager can make a name for himself.

Good book, praise it. It's an old saying, but it's good to read it, but it's a good idea. It's very good to write, but it requires persistence. God cannot handle it at once. It can be seen that you are hesitating, and you have worked so hard and got so little. Is it worth it? I said, it's worth it. As long as you persist, this book will definitely be popular. Believe me, you have conquered the heart of a reader.

It's really well written. I saw the latest chapter. I wrote it. After rebirth, I went to find Li Wanyao. The paragraph I wrote was very well written. It really wrote the feeling of childhood sweethearts. Read so many books. The first time I gave birth to the heroine and the hero were born together. The combination of two people has no powerful elements. There are too many subjective and objective elements. There are some suggestions. I hope that the protagonist will not be written as the biggest costumer in the later stage. I saw it later and found that the protagonist was too bloody. It turned out that he was the biggest costumer. I really don't want the protagonist in this book to be like that. I really can't read it like that.

Have you lost hope for yourself? In fact, those who are not gods are all dogs*. If you do well, you will be gods. If you don’t do well, you will be gods. If you don’t do well, you will be gods. This thing is very experienced. There are 100 Hamms in your heart. No matter how well you write, you may not be recognized by others. At this point, I recognize Jingguan’s words: In fact... the most important thing in writing is to please yourself and make yourself happy first. As for readers, it is secondary... It is not that it is not unfair to readers. This is a moderate thing. If you are not satisfied with others, you can write a hair, unless you are a word and one yuan.
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