explain some issues
Recently, my back hurts a little and my shoulders occasionally become numb, which is probably because of the long-term sitting. Many authors have this problem, so I don’t complain anymore. However, after reading the book review, my mood, which was not very high, became even worse.
There are many problems in "Return to Wear", and I actually understand it in my heart. However, some of these problems are something I don't want to change, while some of them are something I cannot change in a short period of time. Next, let me talk about the reasons for these problems!
1. Many book friends are a little unhappy with the setting of this book. I will explain the reason here.
It's actually very simple. I am afraid of trouble and easily affected by the outside world. For example, a book friend once suggested that I make a revision and change the ratio of this to ten, and it would be a normal world. Actually, I really wanted to modify it at that time, but when I looked back, I found that if I changed it, the article would be completely distorted and it was quite troublesome. I am actually quite lazy, and I was afraid that I would erode my passion once I changed, so I simply turned a blind eye and held on.
As a result, more and more book friends felt that this setting was very painful. In fact, when I looked at these book reviews, I felt awkward. While I was afraid that reading the book reviews would affect my writing mood, I also wanted to see what the book friends really thought. It was really contradictory!
After this setting is changed, problems arise one after another. Because everything in the normal world can be brought to the micro-world. By then, mp3 and electronic watches are all small, and aircraft, cannons, tanks, missiles, etc. will all walk around the ground and fly all over the sky, and this is not what I want to see. But if I really don’t write these things at that time, there will definitely be book friends who think that the author is fighting with others for magic, fists, isn’t it better to have guns and cannons?
So, I added this setting that made many people feel bad is actually restricting myself from doing things and also limiting book friends’ thoughts about these things.
2. Many book friends think that pig's feet are too soft and turn into soft-legged shrimps in front of women.
This problem is actually my own writing level. A book friend has pointed out that because my writing level is limited, the plot I wrote becomes that when it should explode, and when it should shrink, it does not completely disappear. This causes the irritability and impulsivity of the pig's feet.
In fact, although pig's feet are prone to impulsiveness, this is limited by his age. After all, he is just a teenager. With the ability, he will naturally become confident and confident, so he naturally does not want to be humiliated by himself. When others scold him and humiliate him, what he wants is to fight back directly.
When facing a woman, the pig's feet usually don't move their fists, and they can only fight back with their mouths. At this time, it gives people the feeling of being suppressed by a woman without temper. Well, this may be a problem with my language arts. In fact, when I write many places, I feel that the pig's feet are not suffering any loss, but instead teased the woman.
Well, I will try to think more about this issue when writing in the future.
Third, it is the problem of "good luck".
This problem still depends on the writing level. Because the pleasure comes from the layout of the plot. It is still pointed out by the book friend. He thinks that I was too fast when arranging conflicts, because the protagonist has not yet grown to that level and has not yet taken the initiative to step on people, and has arranged such conflicts and conflicts, which cannot give readers a sense of pleasure. When the book friend reads, he sees all that pig's feet are bullied and does not explode at all.
I think this is correct, but actually I also had my own arrangements when I was writing. But no matter what, this arrangement now seems to be my own mistake.
So, in the future, I will try to avoid such uncontrollable scenes.
In addition: I would like to thank these book friends who gave me suggestions. Although some of the book friends' tone made me want to beat the computer, I think the computer is my own, so let's forget it!
Also, I would like to sincerely thank the book friends who voted for me, collected it for me, and clicked it for me, you are so cute! Thank you very much for your sadness!
Another thing: I'll take this to ask for a vote! I've issued a single chapter, but I don't ask for a vote. I'm sorry to the general public and you cute book friends! Well, please ask for a collection! Thank you! Really!
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Chapter completed!