Humans.

Finally started reading the manuscript.

"You wrote very well, better than I expected. According to your beginning, there should be no problem signing the contract."

Yu Zhile said: "But I suggest you set the beginning more cleverly."

"How to do it?"

Xia Zhenyue is indeed talented. According to the traditional novels, before the heroine's time-stop phenomenon occurs, she must have spent a lot of time to pave the way. She has already set the first chapter on the first time-stop phenomenon of the heroine's time-stop phenomenon, and it is written very carefully. After all, this is the real feeling of her first time-stop, and she has a strong sense of substitution.

"If in the first chapter, you first write about the heroine and stop using it and ruining the hero?"

Yu Zhile just pulled this little, and Xia Zhengyue immediately became enlightened.

"It seems that what you say is a bit smoother to write! There are many suspense, what is going on in time, why does the heroine ruin the hero, etc. I feel that readers will look forward to what will happen next!"

“Yes, that’s about using expectation to improve your reading.”

Yu Zhile continued to analyze the plot settings of her first three chapters in detail, about the writing style and description. He asked himself that he was not as good as Xia Zhengyue, but she was still a little short of effort in creating a sense of expectation.

"We can put these contents behind and tell them, including the heroine's life experience, the hero's identity, etc...."

"How can we increase this expectation?"

"Desire, confrontation, and escape can be summarized into these three basic event models."

Yu Zhile gave an example: "For example, if an old man is fishing, why are there people watching? This is a simple desire model. The audience is curious whether the old man's desire to catch fish can be realized; for example, two people are playing chess, and there are also onlookers. They are also curious about the outcome of the game between the two; for example, when the cat falls into the sewer, a poisonous snake swims towards it, and the onlookers are also curious about whether it will get out of trouble; on this basic event model, we use this as a prelude to set the atmosphere to make a fuss..."

"Uh-huh……"

Yu Zhile taught her some of her own writing experiences, and Xia Zhenyue also listened very seriously.

A talented person does not need to teach too much, nor does he need Yu Zhile to teach her how to write word by word. She has her own way of writing. He only needs to give out the general ideas and Xia Zhenyue can grasp it himself.

I have read a lot of novels these days. Xia Zhenyue can understand some of the mysteries, but she has not summarized them systematically. Yu Zhile's guidance can help her avoid many detours.

While studying, the two got closer and closer. In the end, Yu Zhile stopped looking at his own computer and looked at the same screen as her.

The small hand in the middle was hidden under the table and held it. The two of them lay on the table and chatted and spoke quietly. The distance between them was so close that they could smell each other's breathing.

Sometimes the examples given by Yu Zhile are interesting. Xia Zhenyue will be amused or embarrassed by him, with big eyes blank, or pursed her lips with a smile. She is clearly studying seriously, making her feel as if she is talking about sweet talk between husband and wife.

"How many words are you going to write?"

"Well, it's probably 200,000 to 300,000 words."

"Okay, I think your writing style and style are suitable for taking the copyright route. At that time, I will help you contact the editors from Haitang and submit them to review them."

"Do you need to write the complete book first?"

"No, let's write 20,000 words first. Let's try the first book first, but I think you write it very well."

"Um."

"Did you wash your hair last night?" Yu Zhile sniffed the air gently.

Her pretty face turned slightly red, and she nodded, then she came to her senses. Their faces were so close to each other...

"Then I'll go back first. I may not be in the store in the afternoon. I have to go to practice driving. I'm going to take the second subject."

"Uh-huh……"

When Xia Zhengyue heard that he was not here, a trace of loss appeared in her eyes.

"Do you know what a gentleman is?"

"gentleman?"

Yu Zhile stood up, looked outside, then pinched her four delicate fingers, quickly lowered her head, and kissed her on the back of her hand.

His lips were soft and a warm feeling stayed on the back of her hand.

"You're super delicious today."

After saying this, he gave a gentlemanly greeting and left with satisfaction in holding the computer.

He ruined his daughter, and the bad guy greeted his mother calmly. The mother also said that she would come to play often when she had time...

The man in Xia Pinyue was stupid.

I stared at the back of my hand for a long time. I vaguely saw the pale blue blood vessels on my fair skin. The place he kissed was a little wet and cold...

Slowly, she pressed her lips on.

I can't do this again next time...

Want a lady.

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Chapter completed!