(No code is finished, later...)

"Haiwa, you said, do I want to dress more formally before going over?"

Hanaman, who was sitting by the bed, shook his legs up and down, looked at Uesugi Sato, who was standing in front of the mirror to change clothes. "Zojun said he didn't care. He had changed clothes in front of the mirror for half an hour."

Uesugi Toe put on a white shirt and looked at himself who was buttoning in the mirror, "I am a manifestation of respect. No matter what, the other party is also the editor-in-chief of Kakukawa Funku."

He looked at himself in the mirror with satisfaction, turned around and said to Hanamara Hanabu, who was sitting by the bed:

"Does Hana Jiang want to go with me?"

"What are the work of Zaojun, what are the firecrackers going to do?"

"The main reason is that you are bored to wait at home. We can go out for a walk together. The most important thing is..." Uesuma Said for a moment and deliberately kept it a secret. "We two go out alone and can still date."

"Date! No... Um--" Hanamaru Hanaguro subconsciously sat upright, then realized something, quickly covered his mouth, turned his face and said, "You can't go on a date, Joe Jun's favorability is not enough."

Logically speaking, as long as a person's favorability reaches zero, he will feel that he does not want to approach that person at all.

And my current favorability is -5.

Although it is a favorable degree of -5, she does not have a favorable degree of -5 at all, and she is happy to hear that she can date. She is actually looking forward to staying with herself.

Really... I've been dating so many times, why do I still want to date...

Uesugi Seo silently watched her look as if she had turned her face in front of her, walked over and squatted down in front of her.

"Even if Joe Jun said more... Hanawa will not agree."

Uesugi Do not speak, but pulled her left hand wearing a wedding ring and placed it in the palm of her hand.

Her hands were a little cold, and they were still very small and slender, and the bones seemed to be soft...

"Do Hanawa like dates?" Uesugi looked up at her.

Perhaps it was because of an inexplicable feeling that Hanamaru Hanabuki did not turn his face any longer, but nodded in front of him.

"When our favorability becomes higher again, will we go on a date again? This time we go to a different place, a place where fireworks have never seen before."

“Where is it?”

Uesugi Shu lowered his head and was silent for a long time. He held her little hand and rubbed the slender finger carefully. "I have never told anyone about the deepest part of my heart, so is my mother and my father... I only want to share this with you..."

"Then...Zojun must remember what he said to Hanawa." Hanamaru Hanawa had another hand deep in the depths of Hanawa, and turned into a leopard in front of him.

Uesugi Dou smiled as she wanted to hook her little move, and stretched out her little finger with her, and her thumb was connected. "I remember, I will remember every agreement I made for Hanaguchi. For me, there is no more cute girl than her."

......

Uesugi Doo started writing light not to create some emotions out of thin air or money, but to really want to write down his longing and love for Hanaguchi.

Her cuteness, her smile, her happiness, her happiness...

He wanted to write down the scenes that were engraved in his heart and unforgettable pictures.

So the light name of this book is also very simple, called "Love of Hanamichi", and the same is true for the heroine Chika Hanamichi.

It tells the story of a frustrated teenager who travels in Tokyo and the simple girl he meets.

At first, Hanawai Chan didn't agree with this name, and said it was a weird read.

But if you calm down and take a closer look.

"Love of Fireworks"

Isn't this good too?

Uesugi didn't tell Hanaguchi that this book was a late love letter she wrote to her.

After all, when she confessed to her, she gave herself completely to herself, and she didn't have time to write love letters or other pursuits.

It’s a love letter to use a light book, haha, if you think about it carefully, it’s still very romantic.

Before going out, Hanamaru Hanawa ran from the bedroom with a scarf to the entrance. While helping him wrap around his neck, he said to him in a weak voice: "Zhaojun, it's a bit cold outside. Just go out after surrounding this."

Seeing her carefully helping her scarf in front of her, Uesugi Seo was so lost that she even forgot to say thank you.

In fact... no matter how many times I say thank you, it is not worthy of her sincerity to herself...

......

Uesuma Dog thought about this in his mind, got on the tram, and as the tram slowly moved forward on the track, he looked out the window as he listened to the dinging sounds outside the tram, and all kinds of thoughts swayed in his mind.

I hope that as a love letter to Huahuo, this book can easily sign the contract.

......

"You are Mr. Uesugi?"

"Um."

In a coffee shop near Kadokawa Library, Uesugi saw the editor-in-chief named Taichi Morizaki in front of him.

He is wearing a work suit, short hair, glasses, and a medium-sized figure. There is a hemorrhoid under his right eye, which makes people easily remember his characteristics.

And, very young.

As soon as the other party saw Uesugi Sato, he sat opposite him, put down his briefcase, stood up and smiled and stretched out his hand and said, "Hello, Mr. Uesugi, my name is Morizaki Taichi, and I am an editor in charge of the light department of Kadokawa Publishing House."

"Hello." Uesugi replied.

"Mr. Uesugi looks very young. What career are you doing now?"

"College student."

"I'll ask... where is Mr. Uesugi? Ah, sorry, I'm not too exploring your privacy, I just want to use this to find out so that it will be easier to contact us in the future."

It should be convenient for urging the manuscript...

Uesugi Do not reply immediately, but thought about it and said, "University of Tokyo."

He originally wanted to say that he had a student status at Dongyi University and studied at Dongyi University, but it was difficult to explain clearly. So he just said that Dongyi University was just going to say it.

"That's how it is," Morizaki Taiichi turned around, took out a stack of documents from the file package, and said, "I have read Mr. Uesugi yesterday. This is something I have specially commented on in the evening that can be appropriately modified and added. Mr. Uesugi can take a look."

Morizaki Taichi handed the manuscript to Uesugi, and he waited patiently.

Uesugi Sao read it carefully, and there was not much correction, but instead explained it thoughtfully. While respecting his original intention, the conflicts in the plot and the details of the characters were optimized to a certain extent.

After a long time, Uesugi put down the manuscript in his hand.

"What does Mr. Uesugi think?"

"I think it's very good. There are many things I haven't paid attention to." After reading this annotated version, Uesugi had to sigh at the editor's level.

This is something that people without experience will not notice at all.

There are hooks connecting the plot, which makes people look completely smooth and smooth.

"Since Mr. Uesugi has finished reading the advantages, I will talk about the current shortcomings of this book now."

When Uesugi Doo saw the editor Morizaki's straight face, he couldn't help but listen carefully.

"First, your beginning is very good, from the protagonist's frustration, to the childhood sweetheart's rescue and by chance telling him his dream, to the protagonist's rekindled hope for life, and when everything is going well, he heard bad news, and childhood sweetheart and mother suddenly left... Such a violent ups and downs in the plot will immerse readers in it, and readers also want to see how the protagonist brings the childhood sweetheart's remaining money to help her realize her last wish.

"The story is up to here, no problem, it's totally OK... But you have to establish some bonds for the hero on his way out of Tokyo, such as meeting new friends and new characters, and with these things, the hero doesn't live just for the last wish of childhood sweethearts, he is also trapped in the struggle between friendship and reality... At the same time, you can also draw out more things through the hero's friends. These things may have a positive impact on the protagonist's group, or have a negative impact on the protagonist's group, or have an impact on the heroine Hanaguchi's stay or leave. These are things that need to be constructed in the early stage."

Uesuma Said listened very seriously.

Taichi Morizaki looked at him and said, "Second, I suggest adding a heroine."

“Add one?”

"Yes, add one. This heroine can have less obvious feelings, and she can have a good relationship with the first heroine. The most important thing is that she can continue to help the hero in many careers, and the hero can also like her."

"What is the purpose of this character?"

"The entanglement of emotions, the entanglement of choice, the entanglement of heroine staying or leaving, and the complex emotions that can be used to make the readers nervous. With these, they will care more and not want to lose when they fall in love with this character."

Uesugi Sao listened to these words and was silent for a while. Is this the level of professional editors?

Morizaki Taichi's expression was indifferent: "Mr. Uesugi wants to write lightly is not the kind of lightness that is ordinary. I know... Although the number is small, your works that focus on emotional choices and the male protagonist struggles in reality and love choices, rather than cute and cute setting are not uncommon. There are also many successful examples... You are a student at the University of Tokyo and have a high cultural literacy. I believe you can describe this emotion. I also hope you can think about it carefully."

......

While waiting, the time in the coffee shop seemed to have solidified.

Uesugi Sao sighed lightly, subconsciously looked at the manuscript paper at hand, and said to Editor Morizaki in front of him: "Thank you Morizaki Sang, your words have benefited me a lot, but I wrote this work mainly to write down the hero's love for the heroine."

Morizaki nodded a little, "I know, is it that I said about the second heroine that you can't accept?"

"Yes."

Morizaki Taichi put away his serious expression as an editor and said with a smile: "Mr. Uesugi doesn't have to worry. The hero's love is the only one for the heroine Hanaguchi, but what about the second heroine, is it another emotion?"

Another emotion... Uesugi Sato seemed to understand something, and continued to listen carefully.

"Mr. Uesugi, love is a kind of emotion, and it is also a kind of misunderstanding, such as sympathy, respect, love, admiration. These emotions may be misunderstood as love. You only need to be more clever in emotional handling, and finally let the male protagonist wake up instantly and understand who the person he really loves is... Of course, for such a more cliché plot, we can change it a little and add more twists. There is no need to misunderstand, but a real choice... In short, as long as the male protagonist's love for the female protagonist is completely fine."

"How to implement it in detail?" Uesugi asked on his own initiative.

Editor Morizaki began to help Uesugi to deduce some storylines with his many years of experience.

We chatted for three hours before the meeting ended.

There was no time to drink coffee, so I put it aside and it was so cold that no one cared about it.

Editor Morizaki stood up and stretched out his hand: "Although Mr. Uesugi is a newcomer, I can understand that you will have extremely high talent in creating."

Uesugi Teru also stood up and shook hands with him, "I benefited a lot, and I also thank Editor Morizaki for looking down on me as a newcomer."

"Haha, let's go here today. When will Mr. Uesugi make a revision of the manuscript? You can contact me at any time. I will read it several times. If it is appropriate, no further modification is required, and I will arrange for printing and publishing immediately."

"Thank you, please trouble you today."

The two of them exchanged greetings, and today's contribution was smoothly implemented.

After walking out of the coffee shop, Uesugi took the tram home.

Thinking that there was no food at home, Uesugi Go to the supermarket again and bought some ingredients for cooking firewood and quick lunch boxes he ate in the morning.
Chapter completed!